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I mean nothing to you
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I mean nothing to you |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Chanting to myself never look past what's really there when there is no more ~I mean nothing to you~ Though sometimes I think I know I do Ha! In your head once painted wedding white Thinking you knew If I felt it, saw it how can I so suddenly be the nothing waiting shy behind the something I am strange in my devoted sense of hope hope was the bus never caught it wouldn't wait and still I do. One day pretty boy everyone will stop waiting for you for answer you never give time you can never spare Am I? AM I GETTING THROUGH? Whispering loud point in your direction nothing but down when will I smile and mean it? When will I frown and love it.. being away from you I lit your cigarette and inhaled your dirty air I'm a smoker now and you only stamp me out. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Whew....!! Intense. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I lit your cigarette and inhaled your dirty air I'm a smoker now" ~ Sounds like a joyless relationship--and destructive! Wherever this "relationship" goes, it certainly has been good fodder for your poetry! You certainly can get those emotions across!  LL |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Ericc...thankyou, as always.  Linda..no longer in the relationship, just hurting and venting. thankyou lady, for caring p.s I'm not an actual smoker..so don't worry about that either! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
wow. chilling. i felt the raw pemotion here. Good work! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Time you can never spare." This seems to be the downfall of many relationships. I find myself resenting those that don't have time for me... I try to pull back and label it a casual relationship...knowing I want more, resentment creeps in... so I make less time for them... amd then they resent it... but this is life... how can I find a person that has time for me if I let a person that doesn't have time for me fill my thoughts...James |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Yet another one I could send to him.... especially this part "One day pretty boy everyone will stop waiting for you" *hugs* There's nothing as unbreakable as the bond between an Arabian and her person |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
gemjop - I've read some strong words in this writing, but well written... BC |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Gemma~ Strong write...and I very much enjoyed. Susan C. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn gem |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I second that. *lights another* |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
"i am a smoker now" ,lol i hope no ciggys sounds like this guy is missing out gem , your a jewel in the rough wolfy |
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