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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-08-09 03:46 AM



Webshots Photo

~*~
Silence
Quiet stillness
A stillness felt by both
Causes Chill to be in the air
This type of silence has very loud sound
So loud that it is deafening
Hurting between ones ears
Very painful
Silence
~*~

© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
EagleOne
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1 posted 2003-08-09 04:08 AM


Yes, I hear this. Well done!

We live an' learn from our mistakes
The deepest cuts are healed by faith
~ All Fired Up, P.Giraldo, M.Grombacher & K.Tolhurst

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2 posted 2003-08-09 04:13 AM


So loud that it is deafening
Hurting between ones ears
Very painful
Silence

Ethel....How thoughtful of you to post this for Hope.  I am torn between a picture being worth a thousand words, and all that you said.

I loved your poem, as much as my take on it.
  Hugs, you~

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3 posted 2003-08-09 05:02 AM


hugs to both of you
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4 posted 2003-08-09 10:55 AM


Beautiful.
Eric

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5 posted 2003-08-09 11:00 AM


great!

~bjw~

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And heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand
And eternity in an hour.--> Blake~

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6 posted 2003-08-09 11:13 AM


Oh Ethel Mae, i am living this..the silence really hurts, being left in it by someone you love hurts more.

Hugs to both you and Hope

I'm glad gary never does this to you.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

HopeS
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7 posted 2003-08-09 11:29 AM


Awww thank you sweet friend for thinking of me ..... yes sometimes I do think my words fall on deaf ears , then all is forgiven when he appears
hey he as been a close friend online for 7 years .... guess what Ethel he is called Gary too
I have sent him  subtle reminders LOL
Hope

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8 posted 2003-08-09 05:36 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, dearest friend, this is a beautifully compassionate piece and I can tell Hope respects and admires you ever so much for writing this, as I believe everyone here loves you like I do! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2003-08-09 05:40 PM


garysgirl - as I mentioned to Hope, it's terrible when one plays the silent game...

BC

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