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Open Poetry #28

Granted Exuberance

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2003-08-09 02:36 AM

the laughter in the sky
reminds me about the weather,
the fire in my mind
slowly dies.
the feeling of this trance
finds me wanting,
about the laughter I
can never find.
heart beating antics
of the day,
keep me moving
foward and awake.
tapestries of clouds
in the sky,
tangle my web thoughts
in my mind.

the laughter in the sky
reminds me of a moment,
travling alone
across the lies.
when the bug hits me
square in the face,
I lose my focus
and turn anyway.
heart stopping antics
of the ride,
keep me planted
at this time.
the wrong turn made
right for today,
is the easy face
for this way.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-08-09 02:51 AM

I lose my focus
and turn anyway.
heart stopping antics
of the ride,
keep me planted

Loved this tapestry you wove into real life fairy tales, it's the magic I miss most of all.

Thanks, tis a good kind of soothing!!!

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

2 posted 2003-08-10 07:05 PM

"the wrong turn made right for today,
is the easy face for this way"

ahh no matter what dark clouds are above there is always a hidden secret within the storms eye awaiting your arrival .... look ahead my man good things are on the way
wolf

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2003-08-10 07:10 PM

Sometimes a bad step or choice casn turn into something good...everything has a reason!

Enjoyed your poem~Thanks~ARH

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