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The Suit
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The Suit |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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I watch the carving of my face behold the gestures of disgrace from my eyes I've seen temptation succumbed to its master allocation into sheaths of cloths for arms and legs protruded essence of new 'look' extruded into fits of child rage to fit an oft acquired cage. In leisure tweeds as a winter gnome body's graced brushed herring bone fancier than summoned spring drones convened as suitors at queen bee domes... I watch as wrinkles crease the face clothed the arm that held the mace stood fast against student famine enjoyed chess, then backgammon... Recollect first real acquisition dark Godiva suit, in smart tradition made in Italy, direct from the place where local women still spun white lace My suits have grown from solids into stipes desires to dress well has met heeded advice: better to accept the suits that family gives when money is short as one strives to live... [This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-09-2003 02:58 PM).] |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Enjoyed the rhythm and sound of this. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Seems to me the grace of face fits the suits of need... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My suits have grown from solids into stipes desires to dress well has met heeded advice: better to accept the suits that family gives when the money is short and strives to live... Martin, thank you for this thoughtful write. Your poems always show such wisdom. Thank you for that.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very lyrical and full of beautiful visions. Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The right suit for every occasion in your life. May your wardrobe continue to grow and get even better! Blessings to you and your family! You are well-suited!  EA |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Linda, the wardrobe is growing but more figuratively than literally through...I mean experiences accumulate |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Karileah, Ethyl thanks for sharing..  Ericc, Krawdad, I'm having to deal more with the scope of the poem...lucky to see there is some musicality here [This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-09-2003 03:03 PM).] |
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