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Wobbly Head Bob
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since 2000-05-15
Posts 299
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-08 07:59 PM



I've walked bitter streets alone
Been done more than whats been told
And I'd do it all again
I'd do it all again
For a change

I'm stronger more than I am weak
Said more than I care to speak
Still I'd do it all again
I'd do it all again
For a change

For a change
I'd like to be myself
Not emulating someone else
A chance to really make my stand
Clear a path on untrod land
For a change

I've bartered more than compromised
Misunderstood and realized
That I'd do this all again
For a change.

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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2003-08-08 09:33 PM


I can hear the guitar strumming these musical words...  would make for a strong song...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
2 posted 2003-08-08 09:37 PM


This DOES sound like a song.  These are powerful, poignant words, and I love them, love them, love them!!!


Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
3 posted 2003-08-08 11:00 PM


I do so understand your words...

A great write...

Patricia

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