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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-08-08 06:58 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

When the day closes its curtains
With the approaching of the night
The moon makes an appearance
As it casts its white light

In the quiet of the evening
I take your hand in mine
As we stroll beneath the moonlight
Where a million stars shine

The birds begin to roost
Up in the old oak tree
As we walk along the pavement
Arm in arm, just you and me

We stop at the street corner
And you tenderly kiss my face
Then I feel your arms around me
I'm safe and warm in your embrace

These nights I'll most remember
Sharing hopes and dreams with you
My life has been enriched
With you my dreams have all come true

* * *

"Love is a power too strong to be
overcome by anything but flight"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-08-08 06:59 PM



Lovely, Sue...very very lovely...

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-08-08 07:02 PM


Lovely and full of passion.The picture fits your words well.
angelblueyes

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-08-09 09:23 AM


Sue, you know this is ironic because your picture is I believe, "Moonlight in Central Park" and does indeed go hand in hand with your beautiful words . . .
xxoo

Suetang
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4 posted 2003-08-09 06:42 PM


Thank you all for your lovely coments.

Sue - You are so right, the picture is "Moonlight In Central Park" and is one of my favourites.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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5 posted 2003-08-10 09:14 AM


These nights I'll most remember
Sharing hopes and dreams with you
My life has been enriched
With you my dreams have all come true

So very lovely... I like this very much! *S*

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6 posted 2003-08-11 05:54 PM


i loved it , it made me want to drift away to another place , cool picture too

wolfy

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7 posted 2003-08-11 06:13 PM


"These nights I'll most remember
Sharing hopes and dreams with you
My life has been enriched
With you my dreams have all come true"


..I'll drift along, too..

Suetang
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8 posted 2003-08-11 07:21 PM


Thank you all for your lovely words, I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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