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Take The Time
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Take The Time |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Take your hand and put it in mine Let's talk away the time Of places we've been and things we've seen From the blue of the sky, to the hills so green Let's enjoy the sun shining down on us Let's take a ride on a bus A swim, in waters blue deep A promise to each other keep Or let's just sit and talk awhile And show me that wonderful smile Take some time out of our day Telling each other what we have to say angelblueyes |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A very good idea, Crystal... In this information/technological age, most of us forget to do the simple things which in the end prove themselves to be the most important. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Crystal~ Just lovely ... flows so nicely in gentle thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This is so sweet...  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Mark:So true, we don't realize sometimes that in an instant it can all be gone and it takes just a few minutes a day to reaach each other  Marge:Thanks I'm trying to get better  angelblueyes |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Shara:Thanks.The little time it takes means alot to the soul. angelblueyes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Crystal . . . ahh time yes so important and the first to be neglected Beautiful xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
I loved this...great write! Eric |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Very sweet, Angel. It is the simple pleasures that our memory treasures. Hugs, Patricia |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--and he'd be a fool not to take the time to commune with you!  A write as sweet as your name!  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me wanna go out now! thanks for the upbeat here |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
How serene. lovely. Its the little things that count. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
angelblueyes - isn't it great to be able to do any of these things... BC |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sharing in all the simplest of ways is the most satisfying of experiences. Nice write. TD |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
littlewing:Thanks. Time is so precious Ericc:Thank you Patricia: And in our deepsest of hearts Those memories shall never impart my friendEA:Thank you.It goes way too quick passing shadows:Anytime my friend angelblueyes |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
James:Thank you so much Gabriel:Thanks.When we realize this the rwaards we reciever are great BC:Yes it is and with a true friend or family member makes it the greatest gift ThisDiamond:It's definetly the little things that count.Thanks angelblueyes |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"Take some time out of our day" Yes taking the "time" that is the answer. Enjoyed this sweet piece, dear Lady. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Janette:Thanks.In the simplest of pleasures do I find the greatest rewards.Such as my readings here at Passion's angelblueyes |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Take some time out of our day Telling each other what we have to say Angel, this is such an important thing we should do. People get too busy for each other, sometimes. A very good poem, Lady.  Hugs  Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Ehtel:Thank you my friend.It means so much angelblueyes |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
angelblueyes serenity starts with a frame of mind, and then anywhere you are feels good, like this poem. Thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sounds like a wonderful plan to me! *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Martie:I have to agree with you. suthern:I'm glad you enjoyed it angelblueyes |
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