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Just In Time |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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On blade I balance, Delaying decisions. Let want control Or continue in fear? Epiphany evades Blood trickles from feet As options for staying In place disappear. Illumination Escorts your entrance Questions find answers By you being here. |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Brilliant! Rf |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I think I've been in that place, suthern. Well written! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Robert: Thank you so much... I wasn't even sure this was a poem... but Cpat said it was... several months ago. LOL So... I finally got around to posting. *S* (Hurry isn't something I do well. *G*) Martie: I don't think I'll ever be fond of change... even when it's for the better, it's still change... and I'm good at stagnating! *G* Thank you, lady... I appreciate your kind words. *S* [This message has been edited by suthern (08-08-2003 05:20 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Answers are good...James |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
you weren't sure whether this was a poem or not!? dear lady anything you write is poetry to my ears  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
No wonder I wasn't getting any emails back?.....LOL...nice job...but with your feet and history of foot problems..should you be balancing on a blade? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Couldn't have done it better myself.  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
It's all poetry as long as comes from within you.Very well done here.Answers help round us to life's lessons. angelblueyes |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Illumination Escorts your entrance Questions find answers By you being here. I love this...anytime the answer is found...whether it be what you want to hear or not...it is a good thing. I know! This week I have had a year of questions answered in truth. Not what I wanted to hear...but the answers have freed me! I can't ask for anything more. Sorry, I am rambling...but, oh yes, you made me think! Patricia |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
suthern my friend, this is excellent. hugs to you, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Nicely done, Laura....you do know how to build dramatic tension, even with a little one like this. Makes me want to cheer you on -- go for it, suthern girl! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) But at the same time you don't even need answers, when knowing that someone is there is good enough for you! (big hugggsssssss) It's just best to avoid the questioner I believe, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
suthern - yes, the questions do somehow find the answers... BC |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Lovely! and the pome aint bad either! I finally get to meet me auntie! So nice! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Illumination Escorts your entrance Questions find answers By you being here. Ruth, this is a very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. And, I love your new picture. Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and so we finally get to see the beauty behind the beauty of her pen |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Amazing. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Aha! I see that like me you have learned to hurry up and wait...for answers...for love...for just about everything. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Suthern, Indecision decided with the support of love. Beautiful. Susan |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
James Michael: They are indeed! *S* Thank you! Ceinwyn: What a lovely compliment! *S* You humble me... and fill my heart... Thank you so much! *S* Toerag: That was just BUSY! LOL This just took a cut and paste... kinda like the doc did with my foot. LOL Thank you, my friend... very much! *S* Seymour: You sweetheart... I thank you so much for that! *S* angelblueyes: I think you're right... though I've fought that notion for a while and considered them poem wannabees. *S* Thank you! *S* Patricia: Absolutely... sometimes the not knowing is the worst... it leaves us frozen, incapable of motion. *S* Thank you, dear lady... I enjoyed your thoughts! *S* Nightshade: I'm so glad you think so... and thank you especially for the hugs! *S* Ratleader: I did that? *G* Where? LOL Those cheers sound wonderful, my friend... I think I will! *S* Thank you so much! *S* M'toe: It's so good to have you back! *S* I've missed your wonderful poetry and replies. *S* Thank you very much! *S* BC: And thank heavens giving up doesn't prevent that happening. *S* Thank you! *S* LR: It's meet the relatives time, hunh? LOL Thank you, sweet nephew... and big huggzzzz! *S* garysgirl: I'm so glad you enjoyed... thank you! *S* PS: You sweetie... you're always kind to me... and I thank you! *S* Kaoru: Thank you! *S* Kethry: Yes'm. *G* And sometimes it's worth the wait... however long! *S* Thank you! *S* Susan: Thank you so very much! *S* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Escorts your entrance Questions find answers By you being here. Aren't you lovely!!! It's always so good to read you suthern~ and I like how you think. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"On blade I balance" ~ Lending a hand to steady you! You had been sitting on this poem and only now got around to posting it! Why were you denying us the privilege of reading it?   EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Blues: Think? *G* ME??? LOL It's always good to be read, lady... I thank you! *S* EA: I wasn't sitting on it. LOL I knew it was around somewhere... but it wasn't in my chair! LOL Thank you so much... all steadying help is appreciated. *S* |
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