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symphony_of_thoughts
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0 posted 2003-08-08 04:37 PM


Let the music go
It temptates my soul
You have to go with the flow
It'll take its toll

To someone who can't feel it
Relax like hypnosis
A light's been lit
And it won't miss

Shrilling high-pitch
Running through your mind
Like an echoing yell
Trickling down into the bottom
Burying itself within
Dancing notes without a thought
Flowing music never stop
Never think, just listen
And let go


Let the music go
It temptates my soul
You have to go with the flow
It'll take its toll

To someone who can't feel it
Relax like hypnosis
A light's been lit
And it won't miss

Dark abyss of light is where you gotta' go
Remember one more time, to go with the flow

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-06 09:27 PM


nicely written,,,

    

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2 posted 2003-09-07 10:10 AM


Esoteric...I like this style! It won't speak to just everybody, but who wants to do that?

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