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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2003-08-08 03:21 PM






I intoxicate
the sleeping
Plunge star laced dreams
deep within an
innocent chyld's veins
The Goddess
My Mother
Avalon my blood
Arthur's chosen
I am a chylde
Of the fey
Cursed
Bound
Whilst the moon bleeds my name
soul lost
amongst the mist
Stars crumble
beneath my touch
The earth trembles
beneath my desire
I am my own lover
I am a chylde
of the fey
I am the daughter
of the Goddess
I am Morgana Le Fay


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-08-2003 03:23 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-08-08 03:24 PM


You rock!

~*~
I am my own lover
I am a chylde
of the fey
I am the daughter
~*~

Oh yes!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-08-2003 03:24 PM).]

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2 posted 2003-08-08 05:46 PM


Words cannot say how good this is..I am in awe.
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3 posted 2003-08-08 05:58 PM


I l0ved this..very..very much!

insanity is not a crime

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4 posted 2003-08-08 06:01 PM


WOW!!I loved this.
angelblueyes

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5 posted 2003-08-08 06:14 PM


Kris, you have outdone yourself, m'dear
this is beauty . . . pure and driven
from your pen to my eyes . . .
*nodding* this is your best
xxoo

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6 posted 2003-08-08 06:19 PM


Kristen~
This is absolutely LOVELY~
Breathtakingly so~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Ceinwyn
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7 posted 2003-08-08 06:20 PM


we need a blushing smilie yanno..thank you all

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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8 posted 2003-08-08 06:55 PM


a reverant bow
Munda
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9 posted 2003-08-08 07:01 PM


This poem immediately takes me back to the story "The Mists of Avalon." It could have been her who wrote it, which only means you wrote a great poem.
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10 posted 2003-08-08 07:09 PM




There's your smilie...

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11 posted 2003-08-08 08:06 PM


Okay so I read this and didn't reply for some reason, so I read it again... Enjoyed both times, thank you for this awesome read

It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in

Ceinwyn
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12 posted 2003-08-08 08:53 PM


Raph...      

Sunshine... haha    thanks

Rhonda... it's okie I forgive you  

Munda... *smiles and nods*


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-08-2003 09:01 PM).]

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13 posted 2003-08-08 09:06 PM


we have a blushing smile: We also have this one which thanks to me is probably the most used smilie at pip:

insanity is not a crime

littlewing
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14 posted 2003-08-09 09:13 AM


Kris, thas ok - I know I am invisible up there for the love of God LOL

breathe . . .

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15 posted 2003-08-09 11:48 AM


wow! i don't know what else to say...
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16 posted 2003-08-09 12:02 PM


Ooo, Morgana! This was absolutely stellar!


EA

Ceinwyn
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17 posted 2003-08-09 01:50 PM


Sue... I sowwies!!

Ed...

Linda...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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18 posted 2003-08-09 01:54 PM


oh god kris! this is gorgeous!
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19 posted 2003-08-09 04:06 PM


Kris, this is absolutely beautiful. It has
me speechless, and that is something rare for me. LOL
It is awesome, Lady. I hope you don't mind that I'm
going to keep it?  
Hugs  
Ethel

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20 posted 2003-08-09 04:12 PM


and queen of the nothern isles
arthur

Ceinwyn
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21 posted 2003-08-09 04:26 PM


Ethel... sweetie of course you can and thank you

passing... thank you

arthur... thanks for reading  


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-09-2003 04:32 PM).]

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