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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-08 03:18 PM


Come Moment

come
     lie here
     with me
     just for
     a minute
     and let
     me spend
     an eternity
     in this
moment

        

       4/18

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-08-08 04:33 PM




Beautiful !!
hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

Robert Frazier
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2 posted 2003-08-08 04:59 PM


Yes.
catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2003-08-08 05:40 PM


Oh to preserve that wonderful moment. You said it well.
Sandra

angelblueyes
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Oklahoma
4 posted 2003-08-08 06:14 PM


Beautiful.
angelblueyes

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2003-08-08 07:08 PM


OneSlick~
Just too, too beautiful~
So real~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-08-08 07:11 PM


damn red..
Wind
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7 posted 2003-08-08 07:16 PM


ahh..

insanity is not a crime

littlewing
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New York
8 posted 2003-08-09 09:15 AM


ohh this is silent and absolute
perfection . . .

Ericc
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9 posted 2003-08-09 10:53 AM


The moment of a lifetime.
Beautiful.
Eric

gemjop
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10 posted 2003-08-09 11:14 AM


I have one of those...and however beautiful, it now hurts.
Local Rebel
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Southern Abstentia
11 posted 2003-08-09 01:14 PM


melt
in
tanglement
the
gentleman
in
your
gleaming
moment

passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2003-08-09 01:31 PM


ah, in just one moment, we live
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