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At Midnight (repost)
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At Midnight (repost) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Mesmerized, I became peering into the darkness The Moon brilliantly danced upon the diamonds buried deep within the snow Reflecting Oh, The purest white tinged with the blood of your prey at midnight A stifled scream slowly died as your gaze fell upon mine Oh, the pity! Your rugged weary soul it sang beside the blood of your prey At Midnight |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Nice. I just noticed something else. Your name and my signature have alot of Jimi in common. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
  and whatever else...I'm thinking this is beautifully dark and stuff.... god it's a good thing I lost my pen & that my muse is on strike  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-08-2003 02:52 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Repost?! Where the heck was I when you first posted this beauty? Awesome. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey green . . . ahhh hendrix yes - do you see where I live? LOL Nice to meet you . . . and thank you Thank you V Kris, I ahhh beg to differ, you just wrote a thoroughbred on page one missy thank you Chris, it was when I first came here and thank you thanks guys xxoo |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I read this three times and I'm sure I missed any hidden meanings there are, but I did enjoy this. Thanks for the read It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sky lol . . . it was an image I had one night looking out my back window into the newly fallen snow . . . I saw the snow glistening and for some odd reason thought of a lost soul . . . When I saw this, it surprised me, hence the stifled scream and the blood being his trials stained in the pure snow and the pity sang, I saw it on his face - beside the blood of his prey at midnight . . . prey being himself I know . . . strange thank you xxoo |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
Oh, The purest white tinged with the blood of your prey at midnight A stifled scream slowly died as your gaze fell upon mine Oh, the pity! Your rugged weary soul it sang beside the blood of your prey grinning teeth you are so cool |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You not only covered alot ground here, you're in your element and you are striking Tweets~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is wonderful writing, Lady.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am searching for anything to say here |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Chilling! We live an' learn from our mistakes |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Great imagery here Sue....anything with snow in will do for me...thanks... Goldenrose. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
grinning teeth . . . thanks Bri this one is a little twisted to say the least Thanks Bluesy . . . this one kinda scared me lol Dix lmao - is ok . . . you dont have to say a word, I know thank you Eagle - thank you! Is what I was looking for Phil - thank you - imagery? lol - indeed it is snow? you like the snow? Thanks guys xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, I just love the wonderful imagery and sincerity of your words, sweet friend, this vision deeply stuck out to me, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
awesome |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Noah and thank you Brad . . . this was from the archives . . . needed re-working Thanks guys xxoo |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This talks to me, I like it. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
i agree with whoever said it first, you do have a cool personality. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Must've missed this, somewhere.. Amazing write, I always enjoy your poetry. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you walker . . . where are you - I have to go find you . . . Hey green thank you so much - that was very sweet of you to say Kaoru - thank you - I have missed you here nice to see you reading me . . . Thanks guys xxoo |
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