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Greeneyes
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0 posted 08-07-2003 10:13 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes


{From the notebook}

~~~~~
From  love you
    find strength,

In the gentleness
    of your arms is
where I long to be,

The love I feel in my
    soul, you will feel when
your heart beats

Letting go, is a moment
     of longing fr
om a place
I never knew could

exist

~~~~~~~~~~~~


The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you




[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (08-07-2003 10:16 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
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I remember that feeling..no..wait i don't...blah

Lovely writing as always but never enough of it.. keep them coming
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Greeneyes - oh yes, for sure...

BC
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Letting go, is a moment
     of longing from a place
I never knew could

exist

======================

*whispering yesssssss*
(youknowthatiknowthatyouknowiknow)


"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

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The love I feel in my
    soul, you will feel when
your heart beats


Oh Lauren, I do love this!!ALL  of it..  
Hugs  
Ethel
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Aye, this is the truth of it....and you can spread out that notebook of yours anytime -- good stuff in there!

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one of your best loved it
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sister of heart,
miss you so.....

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

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Letting go, is a moment
     of longing from a place
I never knew could

exist


I know it exist now..

This was beautiful and so is that picture.

Susan C.
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your poetry is always so touching...h
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sorry hon, been gone so long I forgot.
  click for the library....

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

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Lauren

"Letting go, is a moment
     of longing from a place
I never knew could

exist"


You are always so beautiful
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yes...beautiful *sigh*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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Your writing is always wonderful.
angelblueyes
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dat made a guy wanna cry.
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is alright by me  --

yeah (sing it al green)

nice notebook
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(smiles) Oh my gosh, it's so funny, when I started reading this, I thought of that John Mayer song "Back To You" and surely enough, part of the lyrics is right there in your signature, yay! (kiss on cheek) It's good to have faith in holding onto love and loving and try to disbelieve it being taken away, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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Lauren,  you have such a beautifully soft
touch to your poetry...always a pleasure
to read.
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18 posted 09-19-2003 08:40 PM       View Profile for ctowen   Email ctowen   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ctowen's Home Page   View IP for ctowen

It seems
   so long ago

these dreams
   that come and go

the strength
   that one should know

what length
   a heart would grow
          ... inspired, once again ...

[This message has been edited by ctowen (09-19-2003 08:41 PM).]

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The last stanza, i knew so well! Lovely write! Peace and Love
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