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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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the care taker did not take care what was given for safekeeping went without sustenance without provisions without what is right the care taker then cursed her for the lack of delight but resilience prevailed for without future without hope her roots dug deeper she reached up and found Light now with or without what is right she is flourishing in the Son [This message has been edited by jellybeans (08-08-2003 02:23 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
  Just sending thoughts... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Early in the week...I saw the darkest cloud float by, indeed it was black as ink. The next morning...a light shown in my mind, and now I bask in His revelation...and, JB, I have such a peace and freedom that continues in this moment, and I will not let it escape me. I am flourishing in His light! I just had to share that with you! I love your work! Patricia |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh how blessed am I...sunshine, your graphic is beautiful, thank you so much, and Patricia, your words could not make me more happy, it is so good to proceed with a clear head, the path revealed ahead by the only One who really knows.....sighs and smiles...am happy for you, and thank you for sharing  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have read this more than a few times--and I STILL don't know what to say. You touched me in one of those "silent places" with this--but I wanted to let you know that m'friend. I can only mouth the word "wow". |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah lady, I am most complimented by your reply, I know how powerful the poetry is that brings me to speechless...thank you for feeling my words so deeply.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
silent places...that's what they're called ey? I'm there. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
now with or without what is right she is flourishing in the Son JB, I am so glad that she is flourishing. And...this touched me in "silent places", too.  Hugs to you, seet Lady  Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You are coming out with some extremely powerful writes here . . . absolutely beautiful . . . your metaphors are perfection xxoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearestLady~ You touch me in my faith ... thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
"she is flourishing in the Son" If you don't mind, I'm coming out to get a tan  “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Lovely. Hang onto the Son with both hands and He will always give you strength. Thanks for lovely words of faith and love. Bon-Bon  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Y'know what? It was so good yesterday... I came back for a visit. Yep...just as impactful today as it will be tomorrow...  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah, again I will say I am blessed, to be read by such caring poets, such loving people...thank you from my heart |
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