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Decaflame
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0 posted 2003-08-07 02:13 PM





The humming sound
Surrounds me now
Coming from far away

Horoscope says
The stars * are aligned *
That matters go my way

Take for instance
That coincidence, that which bears
Some brewing consequence

For there is an in to coincidence
(And still the hum resides)

Something
Seems to be coming along
I smell it like smoke’s fire

Somewhere from the “way
Out there”
It’s bubbling my spirits higher

The stars are setting up a course
A way that I might walk

I wonder if this hum is them,
The spirits and their talk

Oh, I know now
What you’d say
It’s up to me to plot my way

But please, look here,
The horoscope says…
“It’s no coincidence
All that has been going on
It’s absolutely none of that
All that is rumbling on…

For you walked
Among the stars
And heard…the hums and whispers
Of their words”

As down my spine the feeling grows
Through lift of arms I feel aglow
A breathless lift of voice and cheer
Something IS now working here…

For this week has been a’bliss
As nothing has truly gone amiss
I feel that if the stars have sighed,
And I, for now,
Compelled to reply
In thanks for something,
I am not sure what…
But perhaps that coincidence

Is something that
Can’t be bought.

© Copyright 2003 Decaflame - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-08-07 02:18 PM


Deca

Love the up feeling of this...and know it well.  Lovely the way you shared it here...thanks!

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-08-07 02:39 PM


I really loved this, Deca. Especially this ending...

For this week has been a’bliss
As nothing has truly gone amiss
I feel that if the stars have sighed,
And I, for now,
Compelled to reply
In thanks for something,
I am not sure what…
But perhaps that coincidence

Is something that
Can’t be bought


The stars know, don't they....
Hugs  
Ethel

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since 2002-08-27
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3 posted 2003-08-07 02:46 PM


This was a blissful write from one whose planets are all in alignment!

~ May the stars forever light your way!


EA

Toerag
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Ala bam a
4 posted 2003-08-07 02:48 PM


this was really an interesting and well done write...
Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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Missouri
5 posted 2003-08-07 05:48 PM


Oh Deca...what once so appeared on Monday to be the gloomiest cloud now 'tis the sun that brightens and lightens my soul.  Was it in the stars or the black cloud that appeared to me that night...for my friend, I feel so free.  Sorry...I know I have gotten of track here...

I love this...you got me thinking...I need to go check my horoscope from Monday!

Smiles and hugs!

Patricia

Margherita
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6 posted 2003-08-07 05:55 PM


Awesome, Deca!

Love, Margherita

brian sites
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7 posted 2003-08-07 11:28 PM


and still the hum resides....


passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-08-07 11:57 PM


got me thinking, too much...a good thing
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