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angelblueyes
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0 posted 2003-08-07 01:17 AM


I wrote this for a friend of mine to give to his wife.

Take your hand and put it in mine.
Let's walk away the time.
Let's talk about all of the things.
Of all of our cares and all of our dreams.
Let's both of us begin to share.
All of our love and all of our cares.
It's been a long time since we've talked.
It's been a long time since we've walked.
I miss you so much these days.
It seems as if your always away.
I get lonely every night.
My heart seems to be lacking that special light.
I'm telling you this, because I love you so.
Because I don't want our love to go.
We need to take some time for us.
We need to rebuild that wonderful trust.
Now tell me what you think you need.
And the fire to your heart I'll feed.
For when we begin to see eye to eye.
Our love will soar and fly.
You are the love of my life.
My beautiful,caring, and angelic wife.

angelblueyes

© Copyright 2003 Crystal - All Rights Reserved
exhale
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1 posted 2003-08-07 01:23 AM


that was just so sweet and pure, i just loved it, well done
angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-08-07 01:30 AM


exhale:Thank you.Sometimes it's heard to say what you mean and in this instance I was able to help a friend
angelblueyes

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-08-07 01:35 AM


Crystal, this is such a sweet poem
you have written for your friend's wife.
I know she will appreciate it when he
gives it to her.
Hugs  
Ethel

angelblueyes
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4 posted 2003-08-07 01:41 AM


Ethel:Thank you so much.For my true friends I would walk through the embers of he)) and push them to fly free as angels do.For we all have it within us
angelblueyes

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-08-07 08:29 AM


Enjoyed these thoughtful words...James
Margherita
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6 posted 2003-08-07 09:27 AM


Very beautiful poem indeed. What a lovely gift for your friends! No heart will be indifferent to such a warm message of love.
Love, Margherita

angelblueyes
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7 posted 2003-08-07 01:10 PM


James:Thanks.Anything is possible if it's true love.

Margherita: Thanks so much.My friends and family mean alot to me.
angelblueyes

Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2003-09-19 05:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet friend, I know your friend was very touched by this and will forever thank you for this special gift of love for his love! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Crystal, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

angelblueyes
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9 posted 2003-09-19 05:21 PM


Noah:Thank you and you have become one of my sweet friends.
Crystal

QjQ
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10 posted 2003-09-19 08:19 PM


terrifically penned,,,
angelblueyes
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11 posted 2003-09-19 08:24 PM


QJQ:Thank you.

Crystal

Magnus
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12 posted 2003-09-19 08:40 PM


I think this is going to score major points
for someone....for both and for yourself
as well.  Nicely done.

angelblueyes
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13 posted 2003-09-19 08:47 PM


Magnus:Thank you my friend.
Crystal

Sudhir Iyer
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14 posted 2003-09-19 08:58 PM


wonderful.... indeed



regards
sudhir

angelblueyes
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15 posted 2003-09-19 09:00 PM


Sudhir:Thank you my friend.
Crystal

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