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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-07 12:25 PM



Reasonable Season

in no small matter
I search the sky
for summer
for this sun
does not dispel
this winter chill
flakes of ice
cling to green
falling frozen
spring forth summer
I need the heat
thaw me
make me feel
is this a temporary
season in this place
of sun so close
to earth and
no warmth found
for way past
my skin
cold burns deep

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-08-07 12:45 PM


May the sun shine birght on you and may you flourish and grow in wondrous ways you can't imagine.
angelblueyes

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-08-07 03:55 AM


a temporary season, indeed

beautiful heartfelt writing ladyfriend

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-09-20 02:21 PM


This is a very good poem, Helen, I'm sending it back for more people to get a chance to read it.
hugs  
Ethel

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
4 posted 2003-09-20 10:58 PM


We do seem to rage seasons within us,
    perhaps to enhance our moods?
     to direct reasonable souls?


         Whatever the reason, I pray you find your SUMMER!
                    

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