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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2003-08-09 11:49 PM



How long ago was it
When you said our love
Would sour with time?

Many seasons have passed
And still no sight of this
Promised day of yours

A valiant warrior
I have become
Parrying anguish with
Duty and honor
Yet on days such as these
My reasons run dry and only
Tiers echo the void

You deny me even this
Sweet impact of spirit
Caressing spirit
The indisputable power
Of your heart bleeding
It's rubied treasures
Here...
How can I breathe without
reading you speak?

My poet,
The torch is lit
Should you ever wish
To find your way home,
It flames eternal...

~Tier


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brian sites
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1 posted 2003-08-10 01:37 AM


smile

sounds like a lucky man

stand tall
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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-08-10 02:49 AM


Currently wondering,
what a beauty this is.

And a keeper.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-08-10 02:50 AM


this one hurts
wranx
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4 posted 2003-08-10 01:26 PM


This is indeed a beauty, Tier

Read this before work, but had to scoot before I could comment.

There is so much here, the hope, the pensing, and maybe a bit of resignation(?)

You do this so well...

Ed

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-08-10 01:30 PM


"Here...
How can I breathe without
reading you speak?

My poet,
The torch is lit
Should you ever wish
To find your way home,
It flames eternal..."

Amazing write Tier!
So good to read your words today.
~Summertime Smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Martie
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6 posted 2003-08-10 05:08 PM


Tiersdin

True love is like that...it lights a flame that can never be blown out.

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