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Open Poetry #28
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Felinus
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since 2003-08-06
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Princeton
0 posted 2003-08-06 10:36 PM


Wide Open

I open up my soul to you
And leave it all to chance
I put my fears away for now
Without a second glance

I place my heart into your hands
Entrust you with my life
It never seems to matter much
That I’m someone else’s wife

I love your fingers in my hair
I never pull away
It’s always just a game to you
Though you don’t want to play

Your kisses melt into my lips
Your murmurs stop my heart
I wonder how you stop yourself
From ripping me apart
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-08-07 07:53 PM

I definitely feel your angst...

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2 posted 2003-08-08 06:04 AM

This is a really well-written poem.
I like the rhyme.
Hugs  
Ethel
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