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Felinus Junior Member
since 2003-08-06
Posts 20Princeton |
The Tangled Web You knock on the door so softly As I cross the room, my heart races I wonder if you will recognize mine Among your sea of empty faces I hold my arms open to embrace you And you reach to pull me near And as we weave our web of lies I never share your fear I look up and into your eyes As I pause to take off my ring, And wonder how you can look into mine And always smile, but not feel a thing |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my. I'm not yet sure where your first post is, but this is hard-hitting and forthright. Welcome to Passions! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Felinus Junior Member
since 2003-08-06
Posts 20Princeton |
Thank you Sunshine. I am a brand new poet. Quite by accident I started to write as an outlet for my anguish. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I have to agree with Sunshine here.Welcome top Passion's.I know you'll love it here. angelblueyes |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
fantastic poem and welcome to the world of many dreams and adventures |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful writing...welcome *s M |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Felinus~ Welcome to this beautiful world of poetry~ I see you brought a wonderful admission ticket~ Hope to see more of you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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