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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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blue blue are the sky pages thoughts in the mind pages of other colors wrote to disguise fellings brignting the eyes clearing ways continuing without your heart touching mine from past becomes new future changed thoughts of life till the sky is blue . . . Bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (08-06-2003 04:44 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
blue are the sky pages thoughts in the mind pages of other colors wrote to disguise fellings ========================== well how cool is that line of thought and personification. loved the poetic intend. well done poet sir "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bernie, I like this. It's pretty.  Hugs  Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hmmmm....this one seems to have gotten lost. Sorry, Bernie. Hugs Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"blue are the sky pages thoughts in the mind pages of other colors wrote to disguise fellings" ~ especially love those lines!!! ~ I'm glad that Ethel brought this little beauty back to the light of day!  Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Nicely done friend |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
The beauty you show here is great. Crystal |
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