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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2003-08-06 04:05 PM



Are You Sure?

You say you want to dance with me
Well alright -
We can boogie ogee ogee all night long.
When morning is near I will be out of whack
Cause of my sacroiliac.

You say you want to dance with me
Well alright-
We can dance like in Saturday Night Fever
or splash around like Flashdance.
When morning comes I’ll be a sneezin’
Cause the night before I was a freezin’.

You say you want to dance with me
Well.................................!
I’m really not a tease and I do try to please.
Cause if I do I’ll have a wheeze.
You understand about my back out of whack
on account of my sacroiliac.
All that water from Flashdance is a makin’
me sneeze.
That is why I have this nasty wheeze.

You say you want to dance with me.
Are You Sure?

Bonnie J.

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-08-06 04:39 PM


gee bon bon you do make it hard on guy to ask ya"  how about a waltz?  slowly gliding across a moonlit ballroom?




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2 posted 2003-08-06 04:58 PM


very cute
this should put a smile on anyones face
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-09-15 12:57 PM



                               

JilGirl
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4 posted 2003-09-15 02:00 AM


You sweetie!
Clever and witty ye be!

Enjoyed!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-09-15 03:58 AM


very cute!
LeeJ
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6 posted 2003-09-15 07:24 AM


as always, that ingenious mind of yours at work creates many smiles and hugs....Hey girl, good morning...good to see you in there...heres wishes for a wonderful week ahead.  Talk to you soon...Luv Lee J.
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7 posted 2003-09-15 10:55 AM


rofl...

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-09-15 10:56 AM


This brought smiles to my day.Thanks.
Crystal

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