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Disclaiming Personification – Blame the Muse
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Disclaiming Personification – Blame the Muse |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Disclaiming Personification – Blame the Muse From whence Does this touch Of poetry emerge? Perhaps from life, love, Experience, or Observation? Research dissected Dilution distilled Incidents encountered, Events examined, Or by Studied sequences ~ From whence does it stem? Be not so quick To suppose ‘twas My finger pricked By red, red rose, Imagine for a moment That it was just a scene, That words poetically phrased Stood You there, ‘twixt and ‘tween And you felt written words Strike hard your hidden heart And thought, “’tis true, Or she could not impart Such a feeling, so it must be so!” Nay, ‘tis not that way, as you know… For each poet here Is fueled by fires ~ Imagination’s passions! As they burn with desires… So if you read a sad lament Believe at first, what you feel And think not from whom ‘twas meant But observed only a veritable real. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-06-2003 02:19 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This was a very forgiving write. Judgemental just took a hike! I loved this. What one person writes may be totally different than another and it shouldn't be deemed any less than the other. I loved this!!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (08-06-2003 02:30 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Be not so quick To suppose ‘twas My finger pricked By red, red rose," It could have been a yellow rose, huh?  Loved this. Hugs. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh I love this, just love this, this is exactly what PIP should be...and is, minus the poets.....rofg...ok, I am a poet so I should stop that talk...the first time I found out people were gossiping about 'who' my poems were written to, it just blew me away...I just write...why can't people just read? this poem should be a must read for every registered poet  perfect poem sunshine, gotta add this to my favorites |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific penning and well expressed,,, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ditto, Q.. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
So true! Excellent write, Sunshine! ~Tier |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
So if you read a sad lament Believe at first, what you feel And think not from whom ‘twas meant But observed only a veritable real. You are right...yes, you are. So to bring wisdom, beauty, and thoughts to another... This is absolutely the truth said so eloquently and perfectly. Hugs, Patricia |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahahaha you are brilliant . . . Yes, much much needed for us all xxoo |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Be not so quick To suppose ‘twas My finger pricked By red, red rose, Imagine for a moment That it was just a scene, That words poetically phrased Stood You there, ‘twixt and ‘tween And you felt written words Strike hard your hidden heart And thought, “’tis true, Or she could not impart Such a feeling, so it must be so!” Nay, ‘tis not that way, as you know… For each poet here Is fueled by fires ~ Imagination’s passions! As they burn with desires… ============================ Love this Kari... the rhyme, the poetic phrasing and the intend of inspire.... I only wish I've had HALF the fun my muse has been accused of. YKTIKTYK!!!!!  And besides... like KA always says.... "its fiction"  "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was very good. angelblueyes |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
this needs to be read *smile* gonna give it the ol' jb bump every chance I get *grin* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
For each poet here Is fueled by fires ~ Imagination’s passions! As they burn with desires… Oh yes!! Brilliant. hugs, Chris |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Those inspirations come from all kinds of places both visible and hidden deep! Loved this so much ... thanks, Marti |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
big hug for you! I should try more to believe that what I feel first, is truth. Rf |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea Wise and thoughtful you are, this is...also great poetry!  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
xometimex we be me and I art somewhere eltse like the Sunshine State (ov mind) nice |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
she said: "when you can pluck pebble from my hand..."  can I use it? your?...dang? cause this needs it... DANG |
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