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How Many Moons Have I ?

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Marge Tindal
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    How Many Moons Have I ?    
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Tell me
oh please, how many
moons have I yet to phase
across alluring nights of love
I have peaked in the crescent
knowing new love's on the rise
I have basked in the knowing
I am soon set to glowing
with the love shining
in your eyes~

    And ... that's but the half of it~

~I have
risen so half-full
to the specter of you
Shrouded in mystery of
the time we spent apart
Glowed in full-measure
of pure pleasure sent
from bright glow
of heart~

How many moons have I~    

~Again, you phase in
the fullest of soon-rising orb
of soft alabaster glow, wanting only
that you should know - you catch me in
your loving light and hold me in raptured
shine of the night - fully extending rays
of soft glow - spilling of such thrill seeps
through my heart and my soul as to keep
me in mesmerize reflected in another's
eyes Waiting for soft expelled sighs
that lay across a diamond sky
in phases full of realize
the glow of love~


    And then ... there you glow again~


~Rephasing of the many moons of me~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-06-2003 07:40 PM).]

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Martie
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Marge/sis...I may never write a moon poem again...you've got it all covered with fabulous!  
Susan Caldwell
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Very cool!  A double shot of art!

Susan C.
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Not only were the words exquisite, so was the art...

beautiful

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Marge - you are just amazing....

BC
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Ah yes...I remember this one, Marge.
It's one of my favorites.
Hugs,
~Me

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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Marge, this is spectacular.  This is the reason why you have earned the title of Lady Luna!

Bright moonbeam hugs ...

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So creative. I love the way you dressed it up all pretty, and artsy.  You deserve a hand for all the work. Yet another treat for the eyes, and the heart!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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8 posted 08-06-2003 07:01 PM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patricia

Awesome in every way, Marge.  So enjoyed!

Patricia
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9 posted 08-06-2003 07:13 PM       View Profile for Jason Lyle   Email Jason Lyle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jason Lyle

This is very, very cool.

Jason
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10 posted 08-06-2003 07:56 PM       View Profile for Ivy Rose   Email Ivy Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ivy Rose

Marge...This is exceptionally beautiful and exceptionally expressed. Beautiful imagery throughout this poem of a love reconstructed re-phased ***Ivy Rose
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Marge,
WOW

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Artistic work of poetic art. Exquisite!
Love and peace, Maggie ((~.~))

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Sweet -- ekphrasis carried into an art form....nice work, Marge!

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~bjw~

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Your many moons
have always held a
very special grace...
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Wow, how wonderful this is Much admired!

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17 posted 08-06-2003 11:27 PM       View Profile for Betty   Email Betty   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Betty

Marge this is awesome. I love it.
Betty
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18 posted 08-06-2003 11:34 PM       View Profile for angelblueyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelblueyes

Marge, this is absolutely wonderful.You are a very talented poetess.I'm keeping this one.
angelblueyes
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so romantic, breath taking
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20 posted 08-07-2003 12:23 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

lovely, very peaceful in my own way...


L~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

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21 posted 08-07-2003 12:41 AM       View Profile for Suetang   Email Suetang   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suetang

Hello Marge

Your poems about the moon always leave me in awe and this was no exception.

Take care......Sue

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I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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wondering how in the world you do this...shaking head
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This is excellent...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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mooned yet again...

regards
sudhir
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