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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-08-06 05:11 AM


At The Dance

For a second
I looked into her
intense probing eyes
and then I knew I
didn't stand a chance.
For she was already
looking around for
someone else to
share her dance.

JamesLee
August05
2003

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (08-06-2003 05:16 AM).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2003-08-06 07:52 AM


I have known that feeling so many times... well penned...

regards
sudhir

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2003-08-06 08:19 AM


Very sad, perhaps you should do the conga then everyone can join in.
Kethry


Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown


[This message has been edited by Kethry (08-06-2003 08:20 AM).]

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-08-06 03:05 PM


James - ask her, ask her anyway...

BC

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-08-06 03:38 PM


Thank you Sudhir, Kethry and Bill for the nice responses.
I suppose an important part of life is the ability to know that sometimes you are the object of someones affection and sometimes you are not...James

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
5 posted 2003-08-06 04:54 PM


I've known this..over before its started.

which, like you say, isn't a bad thing.

we don't want to be with someone who doesn't like us the same do we?

good to read you james.

xx

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
6 posted 2003-08-06 05:01 PM


he who hesitates loses,, just move closer to her and be ready for the next dance,,

nice write,,,




SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
7 posted 2003-08-06 06:25 PM


Awwww well she just wasn't the right one for you, and you were just spared lots of heartache!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
8 posted 2003-08-06 07:23 PM


I love your write and your style.

Jason

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
9 posted 2003-08-06 08:00 PM


God James . . .
I know this look too
from a man of course LOL
I am sorry
xxoo

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