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PassionandFun
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0 posted 2003-08-06 12:09 PM



Eyes of Elusive "Happy"

I see her stare
from over there
and she has frozen me

It is her eyes
that keeps me wise
to all that I can see

She's a dream
or so it seems
or can she truly be.....

All that I need
to sow the seed
to find the elusive "happy".


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Snowflake From Hell
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1 posted 2003-08-06 12:12 PM


enchantment....wonderful thing

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends.   Godsmack

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-08-06 02:32 AM


PassionandFun, this is a very good first post. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of your poetry. Welcome to Passion In Poetry. Please check your e-mail for a special greeting from all of us here.
Ethel...garysgirl
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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-08-06 02:35 AM


GREAT first post, looking forward for more of your stuff!

WELCOME TO PIP!

Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2003-08-06 02:45 AM


Welcome!! enjoyed....just to be happy would be nice....

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-08-06 06:14 AM


She's a dream
or so it seems
or can she truly be.....

the dream keeps us going sometimes, i know
that one too
welome jeff, glad to see u

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