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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-08-05 09:46 PM



Thunder Storm

There is a clash
Going on inside my head
A rumbling of thoughts
Some good
Some bad
Some ugly
With sounds of thunder
Then I look outside
Turns out its only
The weather

"No matter what obsticles life may bring, remember, You can fly" author unknown

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Saunni
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1 posted 2003-08-05 10:03 PM


I understand this so well! Awesome write.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-08-05 11:23 PM


Well at least it was the weather, and not you. That's a relief.  

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-08-05 11:33 PM


The weather understands..
1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2003-08-05 11:39 PM


a little rain falls on rainbows
Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
5 posted 2003-08-05 11:58 PM


storms are sometimes the answer to things....good piece

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends.   Godsmack

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