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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Suggestive of cures to halt a malady's success preventive means to malt the brew in progress A lotion applied to keep the dryness away A potion prescribed to let the pleasure stay Tissues ask that their essential oils remain Fixtures tasked to prevent potential strains preventive conflict stikes any given day and oppressive orders are meant to stay if only to keep struggles in check were as much sincere, as to accept national diversities... come to grips with real conflicts to fear Trials and errors pose at regular refrains Medicinal doses quantify usual pain Induced by parassitic enclaves at nation posts, promoted by market racketeers or talkative hosts Do we live in a preventive manner or live in substantial manor? Is this the manor that was meant to be or is it the manner of preventive needs? [This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-06-2003 08:40 PM).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Excellent!! Wonderful!!  Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
lots of meaning,as always..thanks |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You know I love a good double entendre - This is excellent - as usual, m'friend... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah....yes...a fine write |
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