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Saunni
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0 posted 2003-08-05 08:50 PM




My children...Samantha, Alexander, and I

The Three Of Us

Little girl, Little man, I call unto thee
As I bow down to that mighty moon
I give praise to that sun, curtsy the stars
For riding the winds with you...

We beat eternity cause our hearts are stronger then that
We out lasted fate beyond our time
Oh, did I say I thanked the heavens today
That I could call you mine...

Look at these faces and you'll see divine love on end
Lust for what the days can give us all
Let's hold on for dear life in the name of God
So we can fly together and never fall...

Oh, the three of us are what faith's all about
Every time we ride on into the night
We're directed to hold what very few do
And, we just head for that angelic light...

Little Man, you gather pleasure inside you
So bright heaven can see it, too
Your laughter haunts a day of unsure
And, I wait to find you behind loves door...

Little Girl, your smile lights the world in itself
What I get from your happiness just magic felt
And, you gleam from the seams of earthly remains
So, know the three of us in skies will never change...

Oh, the three of us are radiant to souls everywhere
It shows the extent of how a Mama cares
Let's wait til' dawn to watch the roses open their eyes
And, stand there arm to arm and side to side...

I plea free to your beauty I see
Oh, do you know what you do to me
I love you both honestly within eternity's walls
And, it'll be heard when the three of us call...

Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

© Copyright 2003 Saundra - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
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1 posted 2003-08-05 09:28 PM


"Oh, the three of us are radiant to souls everywhere
It shows the extent of how a Mama cares
Let's wait til' dawn to watch the roses open their eyes
And, stand there arm to arm and side to side..."
Sauni, this is just beautiful.  You've helped me relive some wonderful memories being my children's mama.  Thanks.  ~K~

ecrivan
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2 posted 2003-08-05 09:29 PM


May you enjoy the moments to spend with your children for many years to come...enjoyed the
tribute to woman's recognition of a devoted family

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-05-2003 09:30 PM).]

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-08-05 10:01 PM


Three beautiful souls, three beautiful hearts, and three beautiful faces!

This would be so lovely framed and on their bedroom walls. Something for them to always treasure from their very special Mom!

Loves 'n hugs to you all!



EA

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-08-05 10:45 PM


What a sweet, precious thing to treasure!!! Beautifully shines about you three. A mamma and her babies. A delight to read.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-08-06 04:57 AM


Lovely words...James
passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-08-07 03:51 AM


just beautiful!
BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2003-08-08 11:10 PM


There is nothing like a Mother's love for her children. This was a lovely pouring out from your heart Saunni.  Thank you sweet poetess for embracing me with your words.  
Paul Wilson
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8 posted 2003-08-08 11:40 PM


Saunni...Such a lovely family the three of you make.Enjoyed the tenderness in this very much.
What family means to me.

F...For
A...Always
M...May
I...I
L...Love
Y...You

This is your purpose in life to always love them...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (08-08-2003 11:43 PM).]

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