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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-08-05 08:16 PM

A Farewell Glance

I paint the sky in shades of you
the past in grays, the now in blue.
The magic held once in a glance
had pierced my heart, farewell romance,
"Goodbye" say eyes, when willed the chance.

The sweetest words from tip of tongue
enlivened once, when I was young,
but as the years fare well their time
I glance my last of you in rhyme
and take to hike, my world in climb.

A love once thought, in faded fall
memories may write their scrawl
and leave behind their glance of word
in silent stillness never heard,
swallowed by the feelings blurred.

A farewell glance, my thoughts in hold,
folded treasure once of gold.
Tarnished, placed on shelf behind
out of sight and out of mind,
my heart once twisted, realigned

To paint the sky in shades of new.
To glance the fare, no clouds, just blue.
The pure of which brings all that's true.
Farewell I say, farewell to you.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-05-2003 08:27 PM).]

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

1 posted 2003-08-05 08:22 PM

M, I needed this. I'm in that middle place I think, half remembering, half forgetting him. I sway between the two. This gives me hope, so Thankyou.

So many great lines, can't quote them all.

I soon hope to wake up and see the blue.

Into my library.

love gem
xxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2003-08-06 07:51 AM

A strong and motivated farewell.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

3 posted 2003-08-06 10:24 AM

Flowing and beautiful like a lavish robe of resolve...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-08-06 10:29 AM

I sincerely love it when we trip over a milestone without fanfare - because somehow, the words are so very special in and of themselves, and it's like finding quiet treasures...

Congratulations on your 9,000th post, Maureen. You've come a long way...but then, we knew we all would, when we found such an awesome group of poetic friends, didn't we?

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-08-06 01:11 PM

M~

Loved this! "heart realigned"...nice.

Susan C.

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