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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-08-05 06:40 PM


Words For The Purest

Frankly, I'm sick of
the purest that don't
want to read my writing
because the flow
isn't just right.

Thoughts of their superior
attitudes of righteousness
make me want to have my fill
of scotch and puke all night.

JamesLee
August05
2003
YouKnowWhoYouAre
Dedicated to Ernest Hemingway
after reading "Farewell To Arms".  
Farewell to marriage, and
family, and hope and dreams.
A sad ending indeed.

© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
1 posted 2003-08-05 06:47 PM


James, you know your words are appreciated here, with us, ALWAYS.

You tell em though! excellent expression.

hugs, hope and love to you m friend. I'm waiting for it all to get better too.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-08-05 07:09 PM


good thing there was an explanation or I was beginning to wonder who you were writing to.

hugss
M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-08-05 07:20 PM


Thanks gemjob and nakdthoughts for the nice responses...I'm not sure who I'm writing to...but they know who they are...occupying the position of a purest they probably won't read this...James
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
4 posted 2003-08-05 10:28 PM


James, your words are wonderful and give so much to us! If you are happy with what you write then the h... with the rest. You know you are good so smile for that reason. Sncerely, Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-08-05 10:45 PM


Feel better now, James! Whoa! Where did that one come from!

Well I know that it wasn't any of us who replied that you were referring to!--or like you said, we wouldn't have read your poem in the first place! lol

Sounds like you have had a lot on your plate. I hope things get better for you soon!

Warm healing hugs,
Linda


SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
6 posted 2003-08-05 10:52 PM


WOW I hope you are better soon, because the wonderful things you get out on paper, and then pass on to us are gems, and jewels that is for sure!!!!! They are just lovely!!! I always enjoy!! Brings me to emotions. I think that's what writing is all about. I think anyway?

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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