navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » distant thoughts
Open Poetry #28
Post A Reply Post New Topic distant thoughts Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-08-05 02:52 PM


the dirt collects under my fingernails
like water in a birdbath
the days go by like years
inching by so slowly
till the day i have to face you again
breathe you again
i cant
i wont
you knock the wind out of me
without even trying
you bring me to my knees
with a single glance
what you do to me should be illegal
its like you kill me everytime you speak
with every word that leaves your lips
your sweet lips
i have to let go of you
and this fascination i have with you
maybe that way
i might be able to get some peice of mind
because right now
your all i can think about

so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time that i let you

[This message has been edited by exhale (08-05-2003 03:14 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
Darklight
Junior Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 12
Sweden
1 posted 2003-08-05 03:14 PM


Hello Exhale

I know of this kind of painful passion
in your signature names is the clue

Love,

L.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-08-06 05:01 AM


Enjoyed...James
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-09-20 12:20 PM



Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » distant thoughts

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary