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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-05 12:24 PM

Apple of eye rots
coreless vision
I have seeds planted
where you could not
grow,

She is gone now
~she ~ is ~ I~
plastic pseudo wisdom
you posess
such a long goodbye,

Our paths will never cross
I have circled
too many squares
with you
impossible notion

let go

I tighten the grip
on my own hand
and beg for
The
End
.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-08-05 12:39 PM

good one...difficult decission, but direct, honest and to the point...and needed for the benefit of closure...definately know where your coming from...good one...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-08-05 12:42 PM

I tighten the grip
on my own hand
and beg for
The
End
.
it does seem that way, doesnt it? if only we could do it for our own self preservation, o so hard tho...

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-08-05 12:46 PM

Hey Gem..this is poetic perfection. oh god...I'm painting..it stinks so bad. Needed a break and you gave it to me

insanity is not a crime

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-08-05 12:55 PM

GemJop~
So many GREAT ORIGINAL lines in this piece~
Stunning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-08-05 12:58 PM

You have a brilliant and creative mind--and a huge heart--sometimes too huge for your own well-being.

You are strong--and you can survive anything, Dear One.

LL

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

6 posted 2003-08-05 01:03 PM

Consider me blown away.

Kielo

I'll never know the cost, but all of Him is more than enough for all of me....

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

7 posted 2003-08-05 01:04 PM

very good,,
enjoyed...

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2003-08-05 04:53 PM

you posess
such a long goodbye

Do I know this.. do I ever...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2003-08-05 04:55 PM

great lines gem...
*s
M

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

10 posted 2003-08-05 07:05 PM

Well done, Gemma.
Some neat stuff here.
I especially like the opening lines.

s.a.g.

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