True colors ( A duet with Tiersdin)

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wranx
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since 2002-06-07

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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2003-08-05 09:55 AM

Blue fails you

Perhaps the color of fire
would better suit with stripes
of gold tipped with silver
For emphasis-
After all, you are royal
But never blue...

Nor the green
For depthless purple struck with crimson
compliments the robe and crown
underscoring
your encompassing the forest
More than the green...

Neither white nor black
For one merely follows the
other into grey somedays
while parading supreme
twelve hours each on others

Perhaps
The color of rain
for your tears taste of
salt and red candy
of freshly picked apples
in a storm washed valley
near some lonely babbling creek

You do alone so well...

Is it that you've become
too accustomed to the thin
wash of solitude?
For your eyes shine liquid
pastels of windmilled landscapes
and sea-sprayed driftwood

Oh, but the blending of two
Posting prismatic against
azure and billowing white
splashes of buttery yellow to
highlight our journey into
togetherness

Alone, so well.

Whatever you decide to paint
yourself in this hour
let it be vibrant & alive
Singing with colors of
passionate emotion
For this is who you truly are

Blue fails you...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Damn, but she's good!

Tiersdin & wranx

[This message has been edited by wranx (08-05-2003 10:22 AM).]

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-08-05 10:04 AM

Gads...
I'm melting.

An exquisite blending
you two.

Curtsey and bow...
for you are both deserving
of the applause!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-08-05 10:09 AM

Bravo you two!! This is absolutely beautiful. My head is swimming with colours now. I'm keeping this! hugs, Chris

"The suspense is terrible.
I hope it will last!"
-Gene Wilder as Willy Wonka

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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3 posted 2003-08-05 11:05 AM

let it be vibrant & alive
Singing with colors of
passionate emotion
For this is who you truly are

Beautiful collaboration! *S* You do "not alone" so well. *S*

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29

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Ohio, USA

4 posted 2003-08-05 11:07 AM

This is really good... You two did well together!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Midnitesun

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Gaia

5 posted 2003-08-05 11:09 AM

Is it that you've become
too accustomed to the thin
wash of solitude?
For your eyes shine liquid
pastels of windmilled landscapes
and sea-sprayed driftwood

***********************************
LOVED THIS, loved the whole piece, a beautifully mixed palette. I'll keep this one.

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2003-08-05 02:07 PM

nice...so very nice

"You do alone so well..."

great line...
and damn there is someone i would love to tell this to...
but would they hear?

i doubt it...h

gemjop
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7 posted 2003-08-05 02:19 PM

SPEECHLESS

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-08-05 02:29 PM

wranx
So now you are a collaborator. LOL Enjoyed.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

9 posted 2003-08-05 02:36 PM

Alone, so well.

Whatever you decide to paint
yourself in this hour
let it be vibrant & alive
Singing with colors of
passionate emotion
For this is who you truly are

darm this is so good and fitting.

Thank you both
M

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-08-05 03:42 PM

Ed and Tier . . .
*applauding*
I am truly amazed at the imagery
taking a simple tear and turning it into a river . . .
a color and making it a rainbow
two thoughts and making them one
I am in awe . . .
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (08-05-2003 03:43 PM).]

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

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11 posted 2003-08-05 03:48 PM

great work...

regards
sudhir

Dark Angel
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12 posted 2003-08-05 05:23 PM

Ed and Tier...WOW! An excellent collaboration...I couldn't tell who wrote what....it flows so beautifully and the imagery? colourful.

I'm keeping this...well done both of you

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2003-08-05 06:50 PM

Tiersdin and Wranx~
Were I asked to recommend a duet from this site, I would proudly introduce the two of you~

Seamless blending beauty~

'Is it that you've become
too accustomed to the thin
wash of solitude?
For your eyes shine liquid
pastels of windmilled landscapes
and sea-sprayed driftwood

Oh, but the blending of two
Posting prismatic against
azure and billowing white
splashes of buttery yellow to
highlight our journey into
togetherness'

One of the most beautiful things it's ever been my pleasure to read here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

garysgirl

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Florida, USA

14 posted 2003-08-05 06:56 PM

Whatever you decide to paint
yourself in this hour
let it be vibrant & alive
Singing with colors of
passionate emotion
For this is who you truly are

Blue fails you...

Oh, Tiersdin and Ed, this is so beautiful. I hope this is not the last duet you two do. I love this and I'm going to keep it. Hope you don't mind.

Hugs

ethel

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

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15 posted 2003-08-05 09:47 PM

a deep painting...

man, this is so good

colors come forth
and take a bow

now
you two

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

16 posted 2003-08-05 09:55 PM

I truly cannot tell where either of your words began or ended! You must have poured your inks into one pen and written with one hand on top of one of the other's--and the gilt pen was guided by two very poetic souls!

Linda

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

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Moved from a shack to a barn

17 posted 2003-08-05 11:06 PM

OK? So I post this before trundling off to work and THIS is what I come home to!

A thread full of compliments.

HEY! TIER! Ya better get in here and help with some of this!

Thanks friends, for all you do.

Ed

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

18 posted 2003-08-05 11:34 PM

Now see! You've all turned me into the blushing poetess! *chuckles* Thank you all for your wonderful responses. It makes a girl feel really good.

Ed,
Without you, this poem wouldn't have turned out as lovely as it has, so, Thanx Wranx!
*Major hugs & a big ol' smackaroo to you*

From my heart to all of yours,
~Tier

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