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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-08-05 09:11 AM


After Midnight

Ran into one of my
friends late this night.
From across the coffee
shop she looked so nice.
I thought lots of things
but these words will suffice.
"Oh my goodness, you look even
more beautiful after midnight."

JamesLee
August05
2003
A waitress friend that usually
works day shift.  Not sure if
she can get any more beautiful.
I was happy to see her.

© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Miah
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since 2002-08-26
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Pennsylvania
1 posted 2003-08-05 09:13 AM


Awww this is very sweet.  enjoyed!
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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2 posted 2003-08-05 09:42 AM


I hope you show this to her.
We all need beautiful words written for only us sometimes.
Eric

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-08-05 09:47 AM


Awww if she only knew.....

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
4 posted 2003-08-05 09:54 AM


Perhaps you should tell her?

Nice one, James M.

~Tier

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just out of reach
5 posted 2003-08-05 10:13 AM


lovely James. Chris



"The suspense is terrible.
I hope it will last!"
-Gene Wilder as Willy Wonka



    

Janette
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6 posted 2003-08-05 10:16 AM


Harmless flirtations ... she had to have loved it!

Enjoyed

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2003-08-13 03:27 PM


This is very sweet. I have been a member since feb but have never posted and im glad i started. this is beautifull! i love all of your work. PLEASE KEEP WRITING

Tequilia

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2003-08-13 03:33 PM


---most of us do!

Love your little slices of life!


EA

RMW
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9 posted 2003-08-13 03:42 PM


James....you take me back. Waitresses have a way. We should write more poems about them. Well done. Bob
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