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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-08-05 07:37 AM


Writing

I write because I must expel
All the flotsam in my well
The haughtiness, the naughtiness
All the ire of mind ingest
For
I must digest my spoon of ilk
I take it with a little milk
I swill it down in subtle damn
And then I look upon the Spam
And
Spam throws coal upon the fire
And Ire and smoke hides’ desire
And that let’s loose my dragon’s wild
And I become a rotten child
Yet
There are times of mist velour
That teases me with dew of lure
When sparkling dazzling crystal light
Pierce the blindness of the night
It’s
Then that I am cast in spore
To the magic of the awe

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2003-08-05 08:27 AM


Awe... you wrote Balladeer a Spam poem LOL


There are times of mist velour
That teases me with dew of lure
When sparkling dazzling crystal light
Pierce the blindness of the night
It’s
Then that I am cast in spore
To the magic of the awe

Have I told you I adore your flotsum. *wink*


"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

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2 posted 2003-08-05 08:38 AM


Flotsam to you,
a bejeweled necklace
for the wife of Neptune...

this was lovely and I smiled
at the way
you strung the stanzas
together...

you wily ol' charmer, you!  

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-08-05 08:52 AM


JM,
Your whispered words of candy rhyme
Has stopped my clock from keeping time.
WWRS

Sunshine,
For that you get a big

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4 posted 2003-08-05 10:05 AM


I know that your writing leaves me in awe dusted by magic! Beautiful Seymour. Since Enchantress is on holiday, I am serving up English Breakfast tea along with hot cinnamon rolls. Mmmm...sound good? hugs to you, Chris
SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-08-05 10:11 AM


You would shine in the dark, amazing as always!! Your words would be found even in darkness.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kahlil
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6 posted 2003-08-05 11:07 AM


I always enjoy the flotsam from your well!
hee hee  Good Morning, Seymour...~K~

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7 posted 2003-08-05 11:14 AM


The haughtiness, the naughtiness

And we want more, more, MORE! *S*

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8 posted 2003-08-05 11:23 AM


Spam throws coal upon the fire
And Ire and smoke hides’ desire
And that let’s loose my dragon’s wild
And I become a rotten child
Yet
There are times of mist velour
That teases me with dew of lure
When sparkling dazzling crystal light
Pierce the blindness of the night
It’s
Then that I am cast in spore
To the magic of the awe


Hey Seymour  
I like it when Randy makes you a "rotten child", when you are "sparkling and dazzling", as well as anything else you're doing.

Hugs, my friend  
Ethel

HopeS
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9 posted 2003-08-05 11:28 AM


Seymour , you flow with a glow
the wonderful poems  you bestow

Hope

Martie
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10 posted 2003-08-05 11:30 AM


Sy

You are a multifaceted, for sure, and rare!


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-08-05 11:47 AM


Chris,
Your breakfast is willingly accepted.


SharaRose
You speak like an angel.

Kahlil
Then I will fill your well.

suthern
In that case I will send you more. LOL



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12 posted 2003-08-05 11:48 AM


Good morning, Mr. T-Man!

--So that's how you do it! Well, I must save this so I won't forget your methodology!



EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-05-2003 11:51 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2003-08-05 02:23 PM


Ethel
Thank you love and hugs back.

HopeS
And your sweet enough to eat. LOL

Martie


Earth Angel
Ya know I love being kept by an Angel. LOL
  

vlraynes
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14 posted 2003-08-31 01:40 AM



You're amazing...ya know that?

Love this, Sy...

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2003-08-31 08:10 AM


vlraynes
And you are a delight.

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