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Darklight
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since 2003-08-04
Posts 12
Sweden

0 posted 2003-08-05 06:44 AM


A cup of tea in my temple


I sit here
seeking the words
hiding in motion
of my breaths

Sensing how
what feels inside
is expanding
touching what
seems to border
outside

Deep serenity
is the natural
temple of my
being and it is
here I want to
welcome You

with a cup of tea


© Copyright 2003 Lilian Rosenberg - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-08-05 06:57 AM



Deep serenity
with a cup of tea...

gives us a lot of food for thought.

Welcome to Passions, Darklight!  I believe you're going to like it here, so sit back, relax, enjoy, and if you have any questions, please feel free to contact a moderator.

Also, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-08-05 07:36 AM


Welcome to Passion's.I think you'll enjoy it here.I enjoyed this, a good way to wake up in the morning.
angelblueyes

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
3 posted 2003-08-05 10:26 AM


I love the quiet beauty in this...


welcome!

~Tier

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
4 posted 2003-08-05 10:42 AM


I enjoyed this,
Had a calm feel about it.
Besides I’m a fan of tea.

Gloom

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2003-08-05 01:03 PM


DarkLight~
Welcome to Passions~

This is a write of soft beauty~
Thanks for the invite ... I think I will~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-08-05 01:06 PM


--am I invited too! I'd love to have a cup of tea with you!

Warm welcoming hugs & a nice hot cup of tea!
Earth Angel

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom
7 posted 2003-08-05 01:29 PM


This has a feel of ceremony about it.
Welcome to PIP.
I look forward to reading more from you.

s.a.g.

Darklight
Junior Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 12
Sweden
8 posted 2003-08-05 02:14 PM


Dear All

I am delighted to be here with you
and look forward sharing poems
with you.....

My native language is Swedish
which makes it natural for me
to find simplicity in a foreigh tongue
which is what I am looking for

thank you for the warm welcoming!

Love,

Darklight



gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
9 posted 2003-08-05 02:32 PM


Deep serenity
is the natural
temple of my
being and it is
here I want to
welcome You

with a cup of tea

How lovely is this? Very! Wonderful first post. an offer i cant refuse. i dooo love tea!



I can tell, you're gonna fit in great. and enjoy it muchly here!
  

love gem
xxxxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
10 posted 2003-08-05 02:34 PM


a lovely write...deep serenity is what I try to dwell in.

Nice first post, welcome

M

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
11 posted 2003-08-22 11:21 PM


I missed this I'm sorry..shame on me for always being fashionably late...enjoyed ohh and welcome

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

12 posted 2003-08-23 12:17 PM


I love this write and especially these lines:
I sit here
seeking the words
hiding in motion
of my breaths
I know about this.  Welcome to Passions!
~Kahlil~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
13 posted 2003-08-23 12:14 PM


WELCOME!
I love simplicity, in both language and form, and enjoyed this first post of yours.

It's great to see a new poet from another country represented here in Passions.

I'll drink a cup of tea with you later, smiling for now, with my cup of coffee.

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