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chillidriver
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0 posted 2003-08-05 12:11 PM


What brings us to this point
Where today and yesterday feel no different
the thoughts we have today seem similar
to those of yesterday
where hours and minutes are tranferrable
not really seeing much beyond this present
having thoughts dissappear as fast as they appear
the blur that was once a thought
now lying idle in some long lost corner of my mind.
life is such a hectic job
or is my job part of my hectic life?
i've pondered all the answers
and look forward to winters cold
where the minutes can be minutes and time shall allow me
a moment for a thought.
until then forgive me if I forget
all that I've forgotten.

[This message has been edited by chillidriver (08-05-2003 11:38 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-08-05 12:15 PM


Chilli, I think we're going to get along just fine......I like the way you think.

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2003-08-05 12:17 PM


God, this is brilliant . . .
Welocome to PIP
sorry I missed your entrance

ahh fleeting isnt it?
xxoo

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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3 posted 2003-08-05 12:26 PM


Hey you.

smile.

Welcome to Passions?

(You seem a little weary, my friend.)



Take your shoes off and sit a spell...

This IS very good, and you have been missed.



Now put yer feet up and stay awhile.

and yes, I DO look forward to reading more.

(of course...chuckle)


passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-08-05 03:32 AM


Welcome enjoyed this
chillidriver
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since 2003-08-03
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5 posted 2003-08-05 06:35 AM


Thank you all
and seren not much time lately but starting to feel the need to write again so I'll be popping in and out in the night.

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