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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2003-08-04 11:25 PM


Don't get me started
On Love
On Faith
On Life
Nor even Hope
It's universal
This depression
Feeling as if
You're hanging
From the ends of
An unraveling rope

Please don't get me started
On drama
On self-deprication
On self-absorption
I'll just have to
Laugh in your face
I'm tired of the
Woe is me complexes
And the Prima Donna
Treat me like a pryncess
Snobby little *censor*

And if you know
What's good for you
Don't get me started
On how much better
You are than everybody else
Because I swear to you
In this life
None of this holier than thou
Nonsense
Really matters
To me or in the end
You might as well
Drop your baggage
And leave it behind
Because I don't
Think it
automatically gets you a ticket in
When you think
You're better than me...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2003 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-08-04 11:33 PM


*smile*

I am glad I am your friend . . .
and whomever this is for
has never heard the phrase,
"Hell Hath No Fury As That
Of A Woman Scorned."

powerful stuff Kris
you scared me
xxoo

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-08-04 11:36 PM


suhweet..
Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2003-08-04 11:39 PM


Sue you're too good to me and who is this for...muwhahahahaha my frustration is universal..wish you were online *sigh*

Uhh hmmm Raph thanx

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-08-05 12:03 PM


Do you feel better now, Kris? lol Wow! That must have felt really good! Slam 'em between the eyes, kinda good!

LOL
Linda

Sunnyone
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Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2003-08-05 01:36 AM


EXCELLENT...sometimes you just have to let it out, and you did it with style, I must say! It's good to read 'real' feelings, and this one is packed with true emotions that are familiar to us all!!!  Love it!!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
6 posted 2003-08-05 01:51 AM


damn..

Skyfire
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7 posted 2003-08-05 01:53 AM


YES!! I LOVE IT!!! I have a couple people I could send this to *grin* you're a hero

It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in

Bec
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since 2001-02-23
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Canberra
8 posted 2003-08-05 02:09 AM


Hi Ceinwyn...

This is great. I can think of a few people myself that this reminded me of. Hope you feel better now, it's always good to be able to get that sort of thing off your mind!

Bec

"Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley

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9 posted 2003-08-05 02:56 AM


awesome! you go!
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