navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » Love Senryus
Open Poetry #28
Post A Reply Post New Topic Love Senryus Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-08-04 10:23 PM



Graphic From Eagles Signatures

~*~
Love is a feeling
When two hearts bond into one
Between a couple

~*~

A   real    love    occurs
As  it   happened   between   us
When shared in both hearts

~*~

It takes both people
Wanting their love to prosper
Before it will grow

~*~

Hearts bonded as one
In   an   everlasting  love
Until death do  part
~*~

Revisited




© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
Wind
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-08-04 10:26 PM


ethel, your poetry skills have grown a lot since you've come here. You are getting so good at these haikus..it seems like they just spout right out from you Good write E

insanity is not a crime

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-08-04 10:38 PM


Yeppers! These little poetic jewels come straight from your heart!

I love LOVE! --and you are a master-- or is that mistress?--of writing about it!


Linda

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-08-04 10:43 PM


Thank you, Liz. I really appreciate that.

When I first came to Passions about the only kind of poetry that I could write at all was just poems that rhymed. I knew nothing about the different forms of poetry. I was afraid to even attempt to write any of them then. Now, I'm having a ball trying to learn different forms.

I really thank everyone here for their patience with me.  
Hugs  
Ethel

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-08-04 10:45 PM


Thanks Linda. You are so sweet.  
Hugs  
Ethel

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2003-08-04 10:48 PM


How true~ it doesn't happen without the other, and the other doesn't happen without the one!!    

Hugs Ethel~

QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
6 posted 2003-08-04 11:26 PM


fabulous senryus,,,
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
7 posted 2003-08-04 11:51 PM


Ethel, so true and have known this myself
I cant get the look out of my head when the priest said to us:

"For alllll the days of your life."

we looked at each other and laughed
(thats what they say now, I swear)
beautiful
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
8 posted 2003-08-05 03:59 AM



Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

9 posted 2003-08-05 09:47 AM


You captured something special here.
Great job!
Eric

SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
10 posted 2003-08-05 09:51 AM


So pretty the words that come from love

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
11 posted 2003-08-05 09:53 AM


Hi Ethel, these jumped right out of your heart and into my computer room. What a wonderful gift first thing this morning!

Huggles my friend, Marti

Ratleader
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
12 posted 2003-08-05 10:04 AM


Love Senryus....love senryus....yes -- especially your love senryus! Each one of these is a little ride down the lane.....

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

Janette
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now
13 posted 2003-08-05 10:29 AM


Ohhhhhhhhh ... I adore these little ones, too.

Thanks for the pleasure.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
14 posted 2003-08-05 12:12 PM


Lori, thanks, sweet friend.  
.
Glenn, thank you...  
.
Sue, LOL  I could see that picture in my mind
of you laughing there. Hahaha!  
.
.
I really appreciate ya'll  
Hugs  
Ethel

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
15 posted 2003-08-05 12:13 PM


Dixie, thanks for the hand clap.  
.
Eric, thank you.  
.
Shara, that's sweet to say.  
.
.
Each of you are appreciated very much.  
Hugs to you all  
Ethel

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
16 posted 2003-08-05 12:15 PM


Marti, thank you, sweet friend. I'm
glad that you enjoyed.  
.
Ed, thanks. I'm glad you liked them.
.
Janette, you're welcome. And thank you.
.
.
I appreciated all of you.  
hugs to each of you  
Ethel

Marshalzu
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681
Lurking
17 posted 2003-08-05 06:23 PM


These are such wonderful little poems, thank you for shairng them with us

Andy

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
18 posted 2003-08-05 06:28 PM


Thanks for reading them, Andy.  
Hugs  
Ethel

gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
19 posted 2003-08-05 06:34 PM


Huh? I'm confuuused? How'd i miss these?



Ah well, at least i found them in the end.



Liz is right, you're good at all these different styles. I daren't even try them. I'm no good at counting syllables and things like that.

Though I should, I may give them a try.

These of course, are going into my library, you write beautifully Ethel Mae.


they make me feel happy!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
20 posted 2003-08-05 06:49 PM


Thank you, sweet little lady. You re such an
encouragement to me. You and Liz both.  

Gemma you are sure finding a lot of pretty
graphics.
Where are you getting them? Look at this one I found........

and this one.......

and this.......

My friend found some of these on the internet. I'm not sure where.

Hugs and love, my friend
Ethel



gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
21 posted 2003-08-05 07:11 PM


http://www.magics.nl/smilies/

I've been finding some cute ones here, there are some cute love ones you would like, and other cool ones.

I was actually looking on websites today at graphics, and even went to webshots, where you get your great pics from, and spent time looking at pics of little babies!

But right now, I'm on smiley hunt!

  

Instant karma's gonna get you.

vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
22 posted 2003-08-05 08:10 PM


enjoyed
Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
23 posted 2003-08-06 12:27 PM



You've captured love and the bond of marriage well here....I'm lovin' them all

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
24 posted 2003-08-06 02:49 AM


Gemma, thanks. I love that place. I made a shortcut on my desktop so that I can find it quickly. I especially like this one I found.....
      Hahahahaha...he's going to town, isn't he?

Yeah, Webshots is really nice, isn't it? I love their pictures.
Hugs  
Ethel

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
25 posted 2003-08-06 02:51 AM


Thanks, Vandana...
,
,
Melissa, thank you. I appreciate that.  
.
.
Hugs to you both  
Ethel

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #28 » Love Senryus

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary