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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-08-04 09:28 PM



+*+*+
Ice-cold lemonade
Slakes summer thirst on hot day.
~ Young entrepreneurs ~
+*+*+

© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2003-08-04 09:35 PM


Ah, a happy thought,
Lemon-aide stands, and cookie crumb faces.
Thanks for this. TD

Krawdad
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2 posted 2003-08-04 10:22 PM


Good one, EA!
I like it.
May I ?

Down at the corner
Dimes and dollars are ready
Thirsty afternoon


Kraw'

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3 posted 2003-08-04 10:27 PM


whenever I sell lemonade? I end up spending more money on the ingredients than I make

insanity is not a crime

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-08-04 10:30 PM


TD ~

Cute and clever!


EA

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-08-04 10:32 PM


Kraw' ~

Why yes!--you most certainly may!

--and I'm glad you did! Enjoyed your senryuic reply! Thank you!


EA

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6 posted 2003-08-04 10:35 PM


Wind ~

My Dear, you must raise your prices!

I love to see our young people being enterprising!


EA

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-08-04 10:37 PM


i'll take two
one for me, one for you,
still the best bargain on the summertime
blockparty.....

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-08-04 10:42 PM


inkedgoddess ~

Thank you!--and I'd enjoy that! "Lemonade Stands" are synonymous with "Summer"!

Luvs 'n hugs 'n lemonade!
EA

QjQ
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9 posted 2003-08-04 11:28 PM


make mine pink,,,
littlewing
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10 posted 2003-08-04 11:38 PM


made me smile, made me smile
now THAT is amazing Linda
God, I do remember that well
and now I am so thirsty . . .
xxoo

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-08-04 11:49 PM


Q ~

One pink lemonade coming right up!


EA



Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-08-04 11:53 PM


littlewing ~

--& you have such a winsome smile!

You're thirsty?--here, Sue!--have a sip of my lemonade that Michelle was kind enough to buy for me!

Loves 'n hugs 'n smiles!
Linda

Jason Lyle
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13 posted 2003-08-05 12:29 PM


Make mine a double

Jason

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14 posted 2003-08-05 03:31 AM


cute
Earth Angel
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15 posted 2003-08-05 11:37 AM


Jason ~

Loved your reply! One double on-the-rocks coming up!


EA

Earth Angel
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16 posted 2003-08-05 11:38 AM


ps ~

--and so are you!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

Ceinwyn
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17 posted 2003-08-08 04:50 PM


ummmmmm lemonade *drools* sorry but I really prefer koolaid I'm still a kid at heart lol...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Robert Frazier
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18 posted 2003-08-08 04:58 PM


poetry worth 25 cents a glass!

Rf

Earth Angel
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19 posted 2003-08-08 05:57 PM


Ceinwyn ~

One Koolaid comin' right up! Is grape okay, Kris? That's my personal favorite!


Linda

Earth Angel
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20 posted 2003-08-08 05:59 PM


Robert ~

I do believe that that is the first time that I have ever received a reply such as yours! lol

Warm hugs & a big smile,
Linda

angelblueyes
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21 posted 2003-08-08 06:22 PM


EA:mmm mmm mmm, lemonade
   like it cold on a hot day
   refreshing and oh so sweet
   makes such a delicious treat

you always touch me with your writes in one way or another.Gotta go get the lemonade now
angelblueyes

Ceinwyn
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22 posted 2003-08-08 06:23 PM


unless it's spiked Linda with lots and lots of sugar yea..thats what I meant

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2003-08-08 06:29 PM


angelblueyes ~

Don't bother making up some lemonade! I have some nice and cold--and fresh!--in the fridge. I'll set out another glass for you!


EA

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24 posted 2003-08-08 06:30 PM


Ceinwyn ~

Of course, I knew what you meant!

Big hugs 'n smiles!
Linda

Corinne
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25 posted 2003-08-08 06:54 PM


This is darling, EA!

Core

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26 posted 2003-08-08 07:10 PM


EarthAngel~
Just PERFECT this one is~
Stirs the memory pot~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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27 posted 2003-08-08 09:43 PM


Brings back old memories.  Makes me thirsty too.  When will this hundred degree heat stop - yikes!!

I like your senryu!


garysgirl
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28 posted 2003-08-09 03:13 AM


Linda, Gary and I would love to
have some lemonade, please.
Thank you...
Hugs  
Ethel and Gary

Earth Angel
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29 posted 2003-08-09 10:45 AM


Corinne ~

Thank you, Cor! Have a great day!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Earth Angel
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30 posted 2003-08-09 10:46 AM


Marge ~

"Stirs the memory pot" --how poetic!

Lovin' hugs 'n smiles,
Linda

Earth Angel
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31 posted 2003-08-09 10:48 AM


RJG ~

With the 100 degree temps you're having, I'll make a whole pitcher just for you!

Coooool hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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32 posted 2003-08-09 10:50 AM


Ethel ~

I've got 2 tall glasses with ice just awaitin' for you two lovebugs!

I have to say it again--I LOVE those tiny "pictures" of you & Gary!

Light, Love & Lemonade,
Linda

VAS
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33 posted 2003-08-09 01:00 PM


delightfullu done, I can see them and feel the quenching

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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34 posted 2003-08-09 05:19 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, this brought back such memories when I was a little boy! (kiss on cheek) I've never really liked money, and when I was 11, me and my sister put up a lemonade stand and my sister wanted the money for selling glasses but when a little girl came and said she was thirsty and my sister said "25 cents please!" I thought she should get it for free because no one should be thirsty, so we did and my little sister sure made fun of me that day! (giggles) Hehehe, I love my sisters so much, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Earth Angel
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35 posted 2003-08-09 11:20 PM


VAS ~

Thank you for saying so!


EA

Earth Angel
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36 posted 2003-08-09 11:25 PM


Noah ~

God bless you! I can picture the scene perfectly in my mind's eye! You are so giving!--perhaps too much for your own good at times!  

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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