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0 posted 2003-08-04 04:44 PM


Baiting The Bull Trap

The yellow cow with no milk
moos loudest, sidles backward
all along along the fence,
tail out, itching for any bull
but the one her farmer keeps.

She’ll find one, too,
always does,and it’s always
a disaster. I think she
sets it up that way on purpose.

Wonder how he’ll like the tickle
of electrified barbed wire?
Seems she does; no wonder she
moos so loud, and has no milk.

© Copyright 2003 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-08-04 04:47 PM


LOL~ You're a trip Mr. Ratleader!!!  
And I gotta love that second verse of yours.


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2 posted 2003-08-04 05:19 PM


Wonder how he’ll like the tickle
of electrified barbed wire?

I doubt any bull would risk more than one encounter... no matter how enticingly she swishes her tail! LOL

I grew up on a farm... so this one left me ROFL... not all that burger in the butcher's shop comes from steers yanno. *G*

Enjoyed very much! *S*

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3 posted 2003-08-04 05:22 PM


Ed...your poem got a smile from me, but suthern's reply got a laugh.  Thanks!  
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4 posted 2003-08-04 06:34 PM


this write brings back memorys of my days on the farm,, many years ago..
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5 posted 2003-08-04 07:44 PM


Oh c'mon!  What's a little electric shock between friends?

OK, OK, if not friends then sort of acquaintances; OK, OK, maybe not acquaintances, but if there was time... but I really am in a hurry?

Really; who would notice???

(A great poetic image, Sir Poet.)

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6 posted 2003-08-05 03:56 AM


heheheheh...dang
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7 posted 2003-08-05 09:48 AM


Wow...!!!!
Eric

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8 posted 2003-08-05 11:19 AM



I want that cow..!

dale


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9 posted 2003-08-05 11:27 AM


  Ed, I really don't know what to say that won't add fuel to the fire...LOL

You are a mess, Mr. Ratleader....
Me

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10 posted 2003-08-05 01:42 PM


Just don't turn on the electricity until that bull is, uh, just where he thinks he wants to be......

Meanwhile, I'll sell tickets.....

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