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jellybeans
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0 posted 2003-08-04 03:15 PM


Never ending

Lord
let my longing
be a circular thing.
Leaving my fingertips
yearning, reaching for You;
rewarded with fulfillment.
And once grasped
and partaken
it sets out
again


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suthern
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1 posted 2003-08-04 05:13 PM


I'll be glad when the rewarded stage is reached... even if the yearning continues.  *S*

I liked this, lady... *S*

scuffedshoe2
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2 posted 2003-08-04 05:17 PM




[Entire comment Edited by Administrator]

Note from Administrator:  JB - thank you for keeping your cool.  Very much appreciated.  Sunshine


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-04-2003 06:44 PM).]

jellybeans
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3 posted 2003-08-04 05:49 PM


yeppers lady, you and me both

and now...I thought about taking this poem down, because of your remark but instead figured that your remark speaks for itself, I will thank you to not reply to my poems as you have, it is disrespectful to me and to my writing, and to my Lord

Patricia
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4 posted 2003-08-04 06:32 PM


A beautiful prayer, Jellybeans!  So often in life I cry out to my Lord only in times of need...and forget to sing His praises when my life is going well.  Now I have begun looking for His blessings in everything...and praising Him for what I see and what is not seen.  To reach out to Him always...and in everything...that is what He desires from His children.

Just lovely!

Patricia  

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5 posted 2003-08-05 03:14 AM


yes!
jellybeans
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6 posted 2003-08-05 02:31 PM


sunshine, thank you so much lady, I appreciate that much

patricia, exactly, I think that is what so many people miss in their relationship with God, and that is the sweet part, they are missing the best part *smile*

ps.....thank you lady

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