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The Girl Of Tillamook Square

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Marge Tindal
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The Girl Of Tillamook Square
~*Marge Tindal*~

Where is the girl of Tillamook Square
who used to play in the street ?
Is this the woman that before me now stands
in fragrance of gardenia so sweet ?
~
A vision so lovely, I would swear
she was the very essence
of the flowers in her hair~
~
Oh, where is the girl of Tillamook Square
who willingly gifted her charms
I would search foreverly
in hopes of holding her again in these arms~
~
She strolled away like the sun-in-set
trailing a lingering afterglow
that greets me on a sweet remember
of so very long ago~
~
She walked away ... like the sun-in-set
leaving a fragrance I'll never forget~


~*~~*~~*~~*~
*Writing outside the box*
'Peel of Reveal' series-in-progress


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Patricia
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1 posted 08-04-2003 03:25 PM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patricia

Outside of the box?  Marge...sure you haven't been writing like this for years?  Wow...how perfect is this verse?  I will tell you...perfectly perfect!

Hugs to you!

Patricia  
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2 posted 08-04-2003 03:31 PM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

Beautiful!
Eric
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This is so pretty!
                Love,
                    Betty
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this is one the belongs in text books, its absolutely beautiful!

-ian
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I like this very much, Marge... could just picture someone meeting an old playmate now all grown up. *S*
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Marge... Memories shared like the setting sun
Dreams of yester year unravel from within
Another day dream for you've just begun

Enjoyed seeing you outside the box...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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Marge, this is a beautiful poem.  
Hugs  
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bittersweet write, I always enjoy
Marge Tindal
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FriendsOfPassion~
As I write from the inking well of many muses, this one caught me in soft surprise~
Not 'knowing' the who or why ... but thankful for the *gifting* that came my way~

I believe that Blesaka, this muse of many personalities, brought me this one~
I've learned not to question the 'why' ... but to simply share the gentle word-thoughts~

Thank you all for letting me know it was enjoyed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Marge Tindal
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And now ... after all this time ... I am blessed to know the 'who' and the 'why'~

Hello, lady ... what a rare incident that brought us together again~

But for the grace of God ... I wouldn't have been here ... and you wouldn't have been here at the very same moment in time~

Can't believe it?  Neither did I !

So ... here's your memory just to prove to you that ... LOL ... I just 'may' have that Karma you talked about ... but actually, I find that I am just 'receptor' ... waiting for the spirited thoughts that drift to my 'listening' antenna~

What a wonderful Christmas *gift* in the presence of YOU~

Now get busy ... you've got a LOT of reading to do !!!!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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