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The Girl Of Tillamook Square
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The Girl Of Tillamook Square |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Girl Of Tillamook Square ~*Marge Tindal*~ Where is the girl of Tillamook Square who used to play in the street ? Is this the woman that before me now stands in fragrance of gardenia so sweet ? ~ A vision so lovely, I would swear she was the very essence of the flowers in her hair~ ~ Oh, where is the girl of Tillamook Square who willingly gifted her charms I would search foreverly in hopes of holding her again in these arms~ ~ She strolled away like the sun-in-set trailing a lingering afterglow that greets me on a sweet remember of so very long ago~ ~ She walked away ... like the sun-in-set leaving a fragrance I'll never forget~ ~*~~*~~*~~*~ *Writing outside the box* 'Peel of Reveal' series-in-progress ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Outside of the box? Marge...sure you haven't been writing like this for years? Wow...how perfect is this verse? I will tell you...perfectly perfect! Hugs to you! Patricia |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so pretty! Love, Betty |
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scuffedshoe2 Junior Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 39 |
this is one the belongs in text books, its absolutely beautiful! -ian |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Marge... could just picture someone meeting an old playmate now all grown up. *S* |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge... Memories shared like the setting sun Dreams of yester year unravel from within Another day dream for you've just begun Enjoyed seeing you outside the box...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Marge, this is a beautiful poem.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
bittersweet write, I always enjoy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FriendsOfPassion~ As I write from the inking well of many muses, this one caught me in soft surprise~ Not 'knowing' the who or why ... but thankful for the *gifting* that came my way~ I believe that Blesaka, this muse of many personalities, brought me this one~ I've learned not to question the 'why' ... but to simply share the gentle word-thoughts~ Thank you all for letting me know it was enjoyed~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
And now ... after all this time ... I am blessed to know the 'who' and the 'why'~ Hello, lady ... what a rare incident that brought us together again~ But for the grace of God ... I wouldn't have been here ... and you wouldn't have been here at the very same moment in time~ Can't believe it? Neither did I ! So ... here's your memory just to prove to you that ... LOL ... I just 'may' have that Karma you talked about ... but actually, I find that I am just 'receptor' ... waiting for the spirited thoughts that drift to my 'listening' antenna~ What a wonderful Christmas *gift* in the presence of YOU~  Now get busy ... you've got a LOT of reading to do !!!!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))>< Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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