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VBallNut
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0 posted 2003-08-04 12:26 PM


I'm going to the beach today
I've got so much to do!
I'm going to the beach today
Want to come along, too?

I'm going to the beach today
To build a castle high.
I'm going to the beach today
To catch waves tall as the sky!

I'm going to the beach today
I might have time to sail.
I'm going to the beach today
A postcard to you, I'll mail.

I'm going to the beach today
I'm staying til it's dark.
I'm going to the beach today
Maybe I'll see a shark!


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inot2B
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1 posted 2003-08-04 12:30 PM


Make sure you wear sun lotion. I'd think twice about getting in the water if there is a chance of sharks.
SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-08-04 12:36 PM


Sounds like fun, but only if I can turn it up on the tunes...hehehe Cute write. Thanks for the trip to the beach with the big waves and the sails... Took me even to the smell of salt in the air, and dogs playing in the water, and with a frisbee! Kites flying, too!

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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-08-04 12:40 PM


count me in....brought happiness and smiles to my heart...loved this one.
VBallNut
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4 posted 2003-08-04 04:06 PM


inot2B ~~ Thanks for the hints!  I always wear suntan lotion - I turn a nice shade of red instead of golden brown without it!  I'm not a very good swimmer, so you won't catch me very far into the water - with or without the sharks! Thanks!

SharaRose ~~ *smiles*  yes, I'm leaving for the beach on Saturday and I can already smell the salty air and the sand between my toes.  Thanks for reading!

LeeJ ~~ Glad you could join me on my trip!  Thank you!

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-08-05 04:07 AM


I dunno about the shark part, but yeah, I'l game...let's go!
VBallNut
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6 posted 2003-08-05 08:09 AM


passing shadows ~~ Woohoo!! Party time at the beach!  Thanks for reading   )
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