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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-08-04 11:32 AM


Point of View
Ominous splinters spread right through the front door
Not stopping to knock outside the garden gate…how oppressive
Just another superior domination, for the sake of profit
Feeling the power I wondered who spiked my drink
With marijuana…between links
Of coincidence and meanings of forked tongues
The ones in the back seat, always telling you how to drive
Shock treatment burned my six sense for a while
And the seventh chasing me around dividing blue waters

Then, by chance, I discovered the magical measures in my life
After being in the wrong places at the wrong times
Connecting concepts, inside and out
The vantage point of creativity unearthing many a proud seeds
All points of view holding me….so I chased the ghost for years
Realizing artistic creativity…through “His” Words….
There is where the bridge began to heal my abrasions
And I realized there is no gap between past…present…future
Cause that’s what brought me to the now…and I never
Want to stop flying…over those walls

I went to the surplus store….and found a jigsaw puzzle
Which, after putting it together…depicts images of the world
None of which are divided…but more so, come together
Full circle…a very heavenly marriage, which is the hidden treasure
Leading our way…
Still sometimes…have trouble reading between
The lines…but then…perhaps...it’s still staring at me in the face?
The patterns and coincidences - unseen by the normal eye…..
Suppose it depends on the entire being of a point of view?

By Lee J.




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MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2003-08-04 12:04 PM


I'm enjoying your style AND your points of view.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-08-04 12:30 PM


Then, by chance, I discovered the magical measures in my life
After being in the wrong places at the wrong times
Connecting concepts, inside and out
The vantage point of creativity unearthing many a proud seeds
All points of view holding me

I love the way you write...You are so expressive

thank you for sharing your thoughts and words

M

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