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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-08-04 11:27 AM


Voice
Sing oh time within the radiance of the sea
Here we stand….embodied
Where I see every vision of life
Subtle is the perspective and theme
Diverging, meandering, conclusive
However resourceful…continuity
With melody clairvoyance reaching out
Profound is the eye of the moment
And I shall never repress the infatuation
Exuberant tentacles seeping unto my soul
Light of dawn has stretched our realms
Far beyond the mind's eye
Summer dreams live within our frontiers
Of celebrated hills moving veils
Like a silver breast holding me closer still
Into some peaceful place of loving memory
Memory which brings me here….to this horizon
Where from the essence…
I live and gleam extension
Do not deny a desire for presence
Streetlights voice the city


Pray while others sleep…
For the golden hue of honey
Shifting amber dunes
A tiny drop becomes the sea
Peace, submission, morality
Volume of vivid collaboration
Celebrates the echoes of transient mind
Thoughts, feeling emotions
So reflectively intertwined
Sound of silence, unlikely to forget
As the muse whispers
Decree, flourishing yet of the greatest consciousness
The page will never end here

Though there was a time I feared your silence

By Lee J.




© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
1 posted 2003-08-04 12:07 PM


Allowing the intent to sediment...

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Janet Marie
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2 posted 2003-08-04 02:44 PM


With melody clairvoyance reaching out
Profound is the eye of the moment
And I shall never repress the infatuation
Exuberant tentacles seeping unto my soul
Light of dawn has stretched our realms
Far beyond the mind's eye
Summer dreams live within our frontiers
Of celebrated hills moving veils
Like a silver breast holding me closer still
Into some peaceful place of loving memory
Memory which brings me here….to this horizon
Where from the essence…
I live and gleam extension
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my this is stunning poetry...
wonderful use of imagery and vocabulary..
a lovely ethereal write.
Well done poetess Lee

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-08-04 03:29 PM


Enjoyed your words...James
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-08-04 06:03 PM


LeeJ - you've written many powerful words here, nicely done...

BC

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-08-05 04:03 AM


damn
VOE
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From the land of Camelot
6 posted 2003-08-05 04:48 AM


Oh how I love that last line...it is just so profound, and speaks volumes all by itself!  ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

LeeJ
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7 posted 2003-08-05 12:46 PM


many thanks to everyone...the last line is when I feared God the most...when I "thought" or assumed he wasn't there.  Life is magnificent...no matter how hard the times...there is always another day...another second in which to learn from.  Without family, friends, relationships, where would we be today?  Such a generous life this is...preplanned?  Maybe? smiles and hugs
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