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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-08-04 10:58 AM



The Last Unread Said

Said it all in it's title,
a summary of the end:
dead before read.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2003 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-08-04 11:00 AM


YOu are good at these.Hope to see more from you
angelblueyes

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-08-04 11:02 AM


thank you, but I am not so sure I would even call this poetry

M

Patricia
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3 posted 2003-08-04 11:03 AM


You know I know!

So much said in this unsaid!

Patricia

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-08-04 11:04 AM


well maybe you do...

hugs
M

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-08-04 11:06 AM


Yep, it's all been said before. That about sums it up! I think one can get tired of trying to be heard, and the other can get tired of feeling they already have heard it before. Never quite meeting in the middle anywhere. Comes a point there's no getting through. I'm getting a headache from beating my head against the wall is words that come to mind. *Ouch.*

Heard this.....!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-08-04 11:10 AM


geee..I said all that???

thanks
M

MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2003-08-04 11:54 AM


A tad futilistic, but cleverly carved, nonetheless...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-08-04 11:56 AM


fruitless whether read or unread, posted or not posted...what's the difference...result is always the same

thanks Mark

M

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2003-08-04 11:58 AM


Maureen, remember the poignant wisdom:  "It's not what happens to you that matters but your recaction to what happens to you..."

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-08-04 12:20 PM


that's for sure...

M

LeeJ
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11 posted 2003-08-04 01:40 PM


I love your work...keep a stiff upper lip...your day in the sun will be there for you to enjoy....
nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2003-08-05 04:49 PM


I never stiffen my lips...they  are better when tendered

thanks Lee
hugss
M

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13 posted 2003-08-05 05:53 PM


Maureen, I really don't know what to say, because I don't know what this concerns. From the replies and your responses, I'm afraid that I may say something and you may have meant it to mean something completely different. I feel that there is something underneath the words, but I honestly don't know exactly what. I could feel hurt in these few words, though. I sincerely hope that you will feel better.
Heart hugs to you (and I mean it, too)  
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2003-08-05 06:57 PM


Thank you Ethel..you have mail

I appreciate your kind words always.
hugsss
M

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