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Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2003-08-04 10:46 AM



I gasp as I lose my gaze of you
I held for an eternity
now you are nowhere for me to see
my breathing grows rapid
as I face my fears
that I will never again get to set my sights
on such a rare and beautiful woman
mature in her ways yet young in the heart
a Lady of talent with words
who can spin tales and poems?
unlike any before her
she is the queen of verse
lyrics are weaved from words to golden script
from her simple touch
Where has she gone is she still there
I wait and tremble in excitement
to see her once again
always ready to adore her poetic presence
I need nothing more
this is my savored addiction

© Copyright 2003 Thomas Goldsworthy - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-08-04 10:48 AM


A positivve addiction is a good thing I know she's there and will always be with you.Very well done here.
angelblueyes

Janette
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Chicagoland for now
2 posted 2003-08-05 10:47 AM


Send this poem to her and she will make sure you do not want from missing her.  

WOW ... lucky Lady to be written about in such a lovely flattering way.

Enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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