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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-08-04 10:34 AM



~~Sir Knight of Time~~

The renaissance returns its glow
The mystified in chance to know.
Dressed in past to dance the times
Producing memories in rhymes.

The Lady, she, returns to press
Ollyne's words in tune, profess
Her knight of new, her days of fine
To capture he, and share the dine.

Receptions warm, the air suspense
The crowning of perfection, hence,
She who peels and sheds her grace
For he alone, will fair in face.

Displaying timely passions quest,
Her time is now, in Ollyne's best.


M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-04-2003 10:37 AM).]

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Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2003-08-04 11:17 AM


I eat this stuff up! I swear....library I must say!!! Enjoyed Obviously

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-08-04 11:19 AM


This one's going into the library.WOW!!!!!Lady
angelblueyes

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-08-04 11:30 AM


Thank you both..but just in case you don't understand it..I work the Maryland Renaissance Festival each year  and  it is coming in the next few weekends. I dress the time period and enjoy the atmosphere. I write as Lady Ollyne when the mood strikes and especially after each weekend. So she has many poems listed in the search in the archives...if you want to read her.

thank you both,
Maureen

Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2003-08-06 02:36 AM


For real...yanno I've always wanted to go to the Renaissance festival it's near crownsville right?? *shrugs* and I have read Lady Ollyne adore it as well *bumps this*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2003-08-06 04:46 AM


beautiful writing Maureen....thank you for the words...

Goldenrose.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-08-06 05:03 AM


Enjoyed...James
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-08-06 02:36 PM


nakdthoughts - I remember her very well...

BC

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-08-07 11:37 AM


This poem appeals to me very much. You are a very versatile poetess!

Congratulations on your 9,000 posts! Take a peek at Announcements!


EA

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-08-07 06:25 PM


Ceinwyn, yes it is in Crownsville, past the State Hospital...if you come, try stopping by Her Majesties Healers...you may find me there.

Thank you for the bump.  

Maureen

Goldenrose, thank you for stopping by and leaving your touch
M


JamesM,  thank you hugss


Bill Charles, and I believe you do...Thanks BC, I can always count on you.


Earth Angel, thanks a lot. I read over there. I just haven't had the time to thank you and anyone else.

But I was surprised.

M



littlewing
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10 posted 2003-08-08 03:28 AM


Maureen
you brought me back to days
of battles and romance . . .
This is beautiful
xxoo

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2003-08-08 08:49 AM


If you have never gone to a Renaissance Festival or Faire I suggest you go..they are fun and the costumes are lovely.


hugs and thanks
M

RunningWolf
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12 posted 2003-09-18 07:36 PM


i like this poem. it reminds me of the first time i ever saw a ren faire in the making on pbs television. someday i hope to participate in one. keep the middle ages alive in words and re enactments.
Bill Charles
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13 posted 2003-09-18 07:52 PM


nakdthoughts - my lady will you always be in time...

BC

Magnus
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14 posted 2003-09-18 09:42 PM


Nicely done M.  The Ren. Faire sounds very
interesting and I do believe that some of
the costumes are quite a sight to see.

thanx for sharing this.

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